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7/12/2010 c1 4bluenvrshoutnvr4
This was really great-you write really well. perfect ending, btw
9/28/2009 c1 4Lobaa
Wah - this is so in character...it's awesome D:
6/1/2009 c1 1Zoe Nightshade
This is great! There are a few minor grammatical errors spread out throughout the chapter, but they don't really matter. You really matched Johnny's character well. I also like the part where the girl's mother comes in. I do, though, think that even though the girl is young, she would make sure her spelling is correct. I would think that the mother would check it for her. Nice work,

-Zoƫ
5/31/2009 c1 2LillyAnnSkigh
u shoould keep him alive. please? plaese, please, plaese, please, plaese, please,plaese, please, plaese, please,?
5/31/2009 c1 12ThatGreenElephant
This was pretty good. It really makes you feel for Johnnycakes.

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