for Cliffhanger10/4/2012 c1 Phia Baker
Why did they end up under that rock?
And did Sokka forget that Toph (I u) was blind? What an idiot! (ass) LOL!
Why did they end up under that rock?
And did Sokka forget that Toph (I u) was blind? What an idiot! (ass) LOL!
6/10/2012 c1 
4InTheMist032000
Yay, I loved this! Hehehe, I LOVE Zutaara and Taang. That's how it SHOULD be, after all xD
By the way, I love your title for this. Very clever. I did notice a few errors here and there, (for example, 'his other hand behind her neck trapping her TOO him' ) but it's really only little things that just need a good proofread. I'm not really a huge fan of a ton of dialogue that isn't followed by action or the expanse into a character's thoughts, etc. But considering it's a little oneshot, it's fine. I would have loved a little more dabbling in the Taang direction, but the implication was enough to satisfy :)
4InTheMist032000Yay, I loved this! Hehehe, I LOVE Zutaara and Taang. That's how it SHOULD be, after all xD
By the way, I love your title for this. Very clever. I did notice a few errors here and there, (for example, 'his other hand behind her neck trapping her TOO him' ) but it's really only little things that just need a good proofread. I'm not really a huge fan of a ton of dialogue that isn't followed by action or the expanse into a character's thoughts, etc. But considering it's a little oneshot, it's fine. I would have loved a little more dabbling in the Taang direction, but the implication was enough to satisfy :)
9/22/2010 c1 brianne19
ok theres only one way to sum up that story: GORGEOUS!
i loved it and i hope to see another!
bri
ok theres only one way to sum up that story: GORGEOUS!
i loved it and i hope to see another!
bri
7/9/2010 c1 10Yanna3000
The last line sounds sort-of movie-ish,don`t ya think?Other than that,PERFECT!ZUTARA AND TAANG FOREVER!
10Yanna3000The last line sounds sort-of movie-ish,don`t ya think?Other than that,PERFECT!ZUTARA AND TAANG FOREVER!