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10/4/2012 c1 Phia Baker
Why did they end up under that rock?
And did Sokka forget that Toph (I u) was blind? What an idiot! (ass) LOL!
6/10/2012 c1 4InTheMist032000
Yay, I loved this! Hehehe, I LOVE Zutaara and Taang. That's how it SHOULD be, after all xD

By the way, I love your title for this. Very clever. I did notice a few errors here and there, (for example, 'his other hand behind her neck trapping her TOO him' ) but it's really only little things that just need a good proofread. I'm not really a huge fan of a ton of dialogue that isn't followed by action or the expanse into a character's thoughts, etc. But considering it's a little oneshot, it's fine. I would have loved a little more dabbling in the Taang direction, but the implication was enough to satisfy :)
9/22/2010 c1 brianne19
ok theres only one way to sum up that story: GORGEOUS!

i loved it and i hope to see another!

bri
7/9/2010 c1 10Yanna3000
The last line sounds sort-of movie-ish,don`t ya think?Other than that,PERFECT!ZUTARA AND TAANG FOREVER!
4/3/2010 c1 2Lit Lady
Oh my gosh, I think that was cute and hilarious. When Zuko asked Katara for a kiss, I was laughing my head off. I can only imagine what Sokka would say if he saw that, good job and keep writing.
6/23/2009 c1 1ihaveprobs
That sounds like something a sneaky Zuko would do. ^^
6/9/2009 c1 ThatGreenEyedGirl
aw this was realy cute! =D i love it great job with this story!

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