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7/8/2009 c8 35bailey1ak
Sheppard's defense of Ronon was solid. The infirmary would be full
7/8/2009 c7 bailey1ak
Poor Munroe, Wraith the size of Ronon Dex, a scary thought indeed.
7/8/2009 c6 bailey1ak
Absolutely loved Lorne in this story. You can feel his panic and frustration.
7/8/2009 c5 bailey1ak
This was an awesome chapter. Getting to see everyone's angle was great. Loved these two lines:

“Argh, whose dancing on my brain?” she retorted.

“That would be the Ancients, Lieutenant,” Lorne snorted.
7/6/2009 c13 27DaniWilder
“I think, “Keep out or die, if you die it’s our own fault. stupid”, is a little harsh McKay,” Sheppard chortled.

I loved this line! :)

Another good story.

DW
7/4/2009 c13 badkatie
Enjoy this story very much. I really like reading your stories. Thanks
6/15/2009 c13 131LMXB
Great story, sad it is over but at least my paranoia can settle back down! Loved Zelenka in this chapter -spot on!

Looking forward to the next story.
6/14/2009 c12 mum
I really enjoyed the other chapters!read upto twelve.

really like the pandors box idea, it getsbetter and better
6/13/2009 c12 LMXB
Ronon is so well trained!

Loved the imagery of a Wraith screaming and running away.

I still have very bad feelings about the box, I blame you for my heightened paranoia!
6/12/2009 c11 LMXB
Yey, she is ok (I hope).

I really liked the image of the little nurse and Ronon's 'if she could throw him out he’s stay out' sounds like a good challenge!
6/11/2009 c10 LMXB
I liked the change of role with Shep and McKay over what to do with the box. Loved the hug between Ronon and Teyla. But the ending? Cardiac arrest? I need another chapter! I also have an uneasy feeling about that box, but I am hoping it is paranoia.
6/10/2009 c4 35bailey1ak
“Okay, let’s go see what’s behind door number 3,” Lorne grinned.

What a great line, love your Lorne
6/10/2009 c3 bailey1ak
It was fun seeing everyone concerned about Ronon being mad that Orla hadn't informed him of her activities for the day.
6/10/2009 c1 bailey1ak
“Well, I could eat something,” McKay muttered earning a snort from Ronon.

Funniest line ever and so Rodney.
6/10/2009 c9 131LMXB
I thought the scene between Rodney and Shep was really well done.
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