for Pandora's Box7/8/2009 c5 bailey1ak
This was an awesome chapter. Getting to see everyone's angle was great. Loved these two lines:
“Argh, whose dancing on my brain?” she retorted.
“That would be the Ancients, Lieutenant,” Lorne snorted.
This was an awesome chapter. Getting to see everyone's angle was great. Loved these two lines:
“Argh, whose dancing on my brain?” she retorted.
“That would be the Ancients, Lieutenant,” Lorne snorted.
7/6/2009 c13 
27DaniWilder
“I think, “Keep out or die, if you die it’s our own fault. stupid”, is a little harsh McKay,” Sheppard chortled.
I loved this line! :)
Another good story.
DW
27DaniWilder“I think, “Keep out or die, if you die it’s our own fault. stupid”, is a little harsh McKay,” Sheppard chortled.
I loved this line! :)
Another good story.
DW
6/15/2009 c13 131LMXB
Great story, sad it is over but at least my paranoia can settle back down! Loved Zelenka in this chapter -spot on!
Looking forward to the next story.
131LMXBGreat story, sad it is over but at least my paranoia can settle back down! Loved Zelenka in this chapter -spot on!
Looking forward to the next story.
6/14/2009 c12 mum
I really enjoyed the other chapters!read upto twelve.
really like the pandors box idea, it getsbetter and better
I really enjoyed the other chapters!read upto twelve.
really like the pandors box idea, it getsbetter and better
6/13/2009 c12 LMXB
Ronon is so well trained!
Loved the imagery of a Wraith screaming and running away.
I still have very bad feelings about the box, I blame you for my heightened paranoia!
Ronon is so well trained!
Loved the imagery of a Wraith screaming and running away.
I still have very bad feelings about the box, I blame you for my heightened paranoia!
6/12/2009 c11 LMXB
Yey, she is ok (I hope).
I really liked the image of the little nurse and Ronon's 'if she could throw him out he’s stay out' sounds like a good challenge!
Yey, she is ok (I hope).
I really liked the image of the little nurse and Ronon's 'if she could throw him out he’s stay out' sounds like a good challenge!
6/11/2009 c10 LMXB
I liked the change of role with Shep and McKay over what to do with the box. Loved the hug between Ronon and Teyla. But the ending? Cardiac arrest? I need another chapter! I also have an uneasy feeling about that box, but I am hoping it is paranoia.
I liked the change of role with Shep and McKay over what to do with the box. Loved the hug between Ronon and Teyla. But the ending? Cardiac arrest? I need another chapter! I also have an uneasy feeling about that box, but I am hoping it is paranoia.
6/10/2009 c4 35bailey1ak
“Okay, let’s go see what’s behind door number 3,” Lorne grinned.
What a great line, love your Lorne
35bailey1ak“Okay, let’s go see what’s behind door number 3,” Lorne grinned.
What a great line, love your Lorne
6/10/2009 c3 bailey1ak
It was fun seeing everyone concerned about Ronon being mad that Orla hadn't informed him of her activities for the day.
It was fun seeing everyone concerned about Ronon being mad that Orla hadn't informed him of her activities for the day.
6/10/2009 c1 bailey1ak
“Well, I could eat something,” McKay muttered earning a snort from Ronon.
Funniest line ever and so Rodney.
“Well, I could eat something,” McKay muttered earning a snort from Ronon.
Funniest line ever and so Rodney.