
6/7/2009 c6 LMXB
Poor everyone. Why do I feel that even when Shep and co get in there things won't get better?
Poor everyone. Why do I feel that even when Shep and co get in there things won't get better?
6/5/2009 c4 LMXB
I read the first half of the story with a horrible sense of foreboding then the box came and spent the rest of the chapter desperate to know what was happening. Need more!
I read the first half of the story with a horrible sense of foreboding then the box came and spent the rest of the chapter desperate to know what was happening. Need more!
6/5/2009 c3 mum
getting to know the characters now. really enjoyed the last one (pandoras box )you are making the characters interesting, and I dont read science fiction!very good at making the chapter end , just when it gets interesting.
getting to know the characters now. really enjoyed the last one (pandoras box )you are making the characters interesting, and I dont read science fiction!very good at making the chapter end , just when it gets interesting.
6/4/2009 c3
22hifield
You just know something bad is going to happen. Glad that you have written more Orla.

You just know something bad is going to happen. Glad that you have written more Orla.
6/4/2009 c3
131LMXB
I can see so many ways things going wrong for Orla and co. Can't wait for the next installment!

I can see so many ways things going wrong for Orla and co. Can't wait for the next installment!
6/4/2009 c2 LMXB
Poor Dr Davies. Surely Ronon gets to play with Rodney in this story? The itchy finger line was so funny.
Poor Dr Davies. Surely Ronon gets to play with Rodney in this story? The itchy finger line was so funny.
6/2/2009 c1 bellestarr01
Oh Boy! Ronon stripping Woo Hoo! Great Start, can't wait to see where you go. BTW I'm obsessed with Ronon Whump and I don't think he gets his share, it'e allways Shep or Rodney. Ready for the next chapter!
Oh Boy! Ronon stripping Woo Hoo! Great Start, can't wait to see where you go. BTW I'm obsessed with Ronon Whump and I don't think he gets his share, it'e allways Shep or Rodney. Ready for the next chapter!