for Ten years of waiting6/3/2009 c1 HoneyGoddess57
It's a sad start with Hera, please continue this very good story... unless this was a one-shot.
It's a sad start with Hera, please continue this very good story... unless this was a one-shot.
6/3/2009 c1 
15jay5merlin
Hmm, this was interesting. Are you planning to make a series of drabbles on various people's feelings on this matter or more about how Hera feels or continue it into a longer story with this as the sort of prologue or just end it?
15jay5merlinHmm, this was interesting. Are you planning to make a series of drabbles on various people's feelings on this matter or more about how Hera feels or continue it into a longer story with this as the sort of prologue or just end it?
6/3/2009 c1 14Elegos-Sirinial-Shamtul
The idea is good, and it wasn't a bad drabble. But you might want ot aim for more show then Tell. (Ie, SHOW the emotions of characters through their actions, rather then telling them)
14Elegos-Sirinial-ShamtulThe idea is good, and it wasn't a bad drabble. But you might want ot aim for more show then Tell. (Ie, SHOW the emotions of characters through their actions, rather then telling them)