for Hitotsu ni suru5/24/2024 c10 
4EricFreak
This is a really fun story. Ranko to replace naruto sounds mean, but honestly i really think its a cool crossover idea. You should pick this back up again sometime.
4EricFreakThis is a really fun story. Ranko to replace naruto sounds mean, but honestly i really think its a cool crossover idea. You should pick this back up again sometime.
10/30/2022 c1 f
man why you kill off naruto wtf that's just so wrong
man why you kill off naruto wtf that's just so wrong
5/19/2018 c5 Kitten Arina
I think by saying that your Naruto and stating your Nauto’s sister that would be saying that something is not right.
I think by saying that your Naruto and stating your Nauto’s sister that would be saying that something is not right.
5/19/2018 c3 Kitten Arina
I thought you said that she was going to wake up doesn’t seem to me that she truly did.
I thought you said that she was going to wake up doesn’t seem to me that she truly did.
5/19/2018 c1 Kitten Arina
I have yet to come across a story that you truly marked as complete and wish that you would update them. With either new chapters or a chapter that brings everything together to complete the story.
I have yet to come across a story that you truly marked as complete and wish that you would update them. With either new chapters or a chapter that brings everything together to complete the story.
9/23/2016 c10 4Monster King
Good story i just hope you finish it as it would be a shame if you just abandoned it all in all good job.
4Monster KingGood story i just hope you finish it as it would be a shame if you just abandoned it all in all good job.
8/22/2016 c10 1silverstreak93242
greetings, here's hoping that this review finds you well. I must say that I enjoyed reading this story, and I find the story line and premise rather interesting I am hoping that is story isn't dead, simply on long long hiatus...I am rather interested to see what your going to do with Ranma or rather Ranko in this new world she finds herself in, and how your going to bring her martial arts or rather taijutsu skills into this story, and how the people around her will react? I again hope that this story isn't dead, but if so, could you please let me know? I look forward to any future chapters that you write for this story!
1silverstreak93242greetings, here's hoping that this review finds you well. I must say that I enjoyed reading this story, and I find the story line and premise rather interesting I am hoping that is story isn't dead, simply on long long hiatus...I am rather interested to see what your going to do with Ranma or rather Ranko in this new world she finds herself in, and how your going to bring her martial arts or rather taijutsu skills into this story, and how the people around her will react? I again hope that this story isn't dead, but if so, could you please let me know? I look forward to any future chapters that you write for this story!
12/19/2015 c5 2StatetWolf
You might want to change Ranko's introduction to In and Sakura a little as she refers to herself as both Naruto and his sister.
2StatetWolfYou might want to change Ranko's introduction to In and Sakura a little as she refers to herself as both Naruto and his sister.
6/29/2015 c10 Guest
Great story just hoped you continue writing.
Great story just hoped you continue writing.