for Dawn's Saviour8/16/2011 c4 
8LD-2015
omg! i was not listening to the song you told me but listening to something else. the song i was listening to is called
Ni Bu Zhi Dao De Shi by Lee Hom Wang/Wang Lee Hom
it was soo good! i loved this! awwwz
8LD-2015omg! i was not listening to the song you told me but listening to something else. the song i was listening to is called
Ni Bu Zhi Dao De Shi by Lee Hom Wang/Wang Lee Hom
it was soo good! i loved this! awwwz
8/16/2011 c3 LD-2015
omg omg omg omg omg! so crazy! paul comes out of nowhere and shows himself to dawn, about time..."STALKER"
omg omg omg omg omg! so crazy! paul comes out of nowhere and shows himself to dawn, about time..."STALKER"
1/2/2010 c4 15mednin
Everything in this story was overall perfect. Their wasn't much OOC and if their was it was for the story, your grammer was AMAZING (lol I sound like a nerd),sentence structure was great, and I could see most of it clearly in my head. I loved this story so much that I'm actually going to read it twice, TWICE, and I NEVER read fan fictions twice unless it's really really REALLY good and this fan fiction was outstanding. I honestly hope you do make more Paul and Dawn fan fictions because, for the thousanth time, this story is amazing. Plus, this is only your second fan fiction, I can't wait for the next one! If this is only your second one and your already writing amazing stories as this, then I bet future stories will be so great that the awesomness is something you just can't describe. This is also kind of a long review for me to type and that means something as well. Anyway, take care and please write some more!
15medninEverything in this story was overall perfect. Their wasn't much OOC and if their was it was for the story, your grammer was AMAZING (lol I sound like a nerd),sentence structure was great, and I could see most of it clearly in my head. I loved this story so much that I'm actually going to read it twice, TWICE, and I NEVER read fan fictions twice unless it's really really REALLY good and this fan fiction was outstanding. I honestly hope you do make more Paul and Dawn fan fictions because, for the thousanth time, this story is amazing. Plus, this is only your second fan fiction, I can't wait for the next one! If this is only your second one and your already writing amazing stories as this, then I bet future stories will be so great that the awesomness is something you just can't describe. This is also kind of a long review for me to type and that means something as well. Anyway, take care and please write some more!
1/2/2010 c2 mednin
Misty is in perfect character. And I love the mystery, I hope you make more mystery/romance ones or vice versa for Dawn and Paul because this is so good XD
Misty is in perfect character. And I love the mystery, I hope you make more mystery/romance ones or vice versa for Dawn and Paul because this is so good XD
1/2/2010 c1 mednin
This is onlyt your second one? I would have never guessed honestly, it's so good so far, I'm so excited about reading the next chapter! Oh yeah and please make more Dawn and Paul fanfictions :)
This is onlyt your second one? I would have never guessed honestly, it's so good so far, I'm so excited about reading the next chapter! Oh yeah and please make more Dawn and Paul fanfictions :)
6/27/2009 c4 36FrivolousFlare
It was very fluffy, and quite cute! I liked the idea of Dawn being saved by a mystery person!
Paul was kind of OOC but, oh well, not like anyone can make him do things like that with him in character!
Keep Writing!
36FrivolousFlareIt was very fluffy, and quite cute! I liked the idea of Dawn being saved by a mystery person!
Paul was kind of OOC but, oh well, not like anyone can make him do things like that with him in character!
Keep Writing!
6/15/2009 c4 7Luckycookie
I think this was a great story. I love the ending chapter. GO PAUL! GO DAWN
7LuckycookieI think this was a great story. I love the ending chapter. GO PAUL! GO DAWN
6/11/2009 c3 Luckycookie
I didn't expect that Paul was the mistery person at all. What a surprise. You stoory is going really good. I like it. Keep writing class chapters.
I didn't expect that Paul was the mistery person at all. What a surprise. You stoory is going really good. I like it. Keep writing class chapters.
6/9/2009 c1 Luckycookie
I like your first chapter even though I don'T know much about pokemon, its cool. That Misty girl is stupid. I wouldn't mind if my friend hangs out with another girl and they are just friends.
I like your first chapter even though I don'T know much about pokemon, its cool. That Misty girl is stupid. I wouldn't mind if my friend hangs out with another girl and they are just friends.
6/5/2009 c1 165Pete the Rock
So-so start, but are you including Digimon? There is a Pokemon only section in the Games category, if you weren't aware. Plus, you seem to rush this a bit too fast. Add detail.
165Pete the RockSo-so start, but are you including Digimon? There is a Pokemon only section in the Games category, if you weren't aware. Plus, you seem to rush this a bit too fast. Add detail.