for Bare12/10/2022 c28 CynMar Rom
I loved this tale. It was heart wrenching at times and so so painfully beautiful at others.
I love that he eventually got help, and I love how they worked on their relationship.
Thanks for sharing!
I loved this tale. It was heart wrenching at times and so so painfully beautiful at others.
I love that he eventually got help, and I love how they worked on their relationship.
Thanks for sharing!
9/9/2022 c28 Toni-smith
I loved this so much it was wonderful. Regards Toni Smith
I loved this so much it was wonderful. Regards Toni Smith
5/14/2021 c13 levityoflonging
I don't like this. He won't open up to her and he is keeping things from her, but she feels like she did something wrong. It feels like he is stringing her along in a way.
I don't like this. He won't open up to her and he is keeping things from her, but she feels like she did something wrong. It feels like he is stringing her along in a way.
3/12/2021 c26 Barbell21
What a beautiful beautiful story. Maybe even the best I’ve read on here. I looooooved ALL of these characters and how different you made them, especially the secondary characters like rose, emmet and jasper. So good!
What a beautiful beautiful story. Maybe even the best I’ve read on here. I looooooved ALL of these characters and how different you made them, especially the secondary characters like rose, emmet and jasper. So good!
3/12/2021 c20 Barbell21
Ugh yes Alice! Tell her she fucked up but I can sympathize with Bella too. I love that. I usually really hate it when Bella fucks up or when she doesn’t and she’s being made out as the bad guy but I don’t think anyone is wrong here. Bella is valid in how she feels even if she went about it too drastically. Love it!
Ugh yes Alice! Tell her she fucked up but I can sympathize with Bella too. I love that. I usually really hate it when Bella fucks up or when she doesn’t and she’s being made out as the bad guy but I don’t think anyone is wrong here. Bella is valid in how she feels even if she went about it too drastically. Love it!
3/12/2021 c19 Barbell21
So far this is the first story where Bella leaves Edward and uses the words. Loooove it. And I’m sorry for not reviewing every chapter, I’m so in love with ALL of these characterswhich is extremely rare) I just can’t stop reading. All of them are so beautiful in their own way and SO UNIQUE!
So far this is the first story where Bella leaves Edward and uses the words. Loooove it. And I’m sorry for not reviewing every chapter, I’m so in love with ALL of these characterswhich is extremely rare) I just can’t stop reading. All of them are so beautiful in their own way and SO UNIQUE!
2/8/2021 c6 iAnoved
" I choose to impress myself with the ability to hold this convo. without vomiting" it was quoted like these I missed and stuck in my subconscious over the pass years lmao ️
" I choose to impress myself with the ability to hold this convo. without vomiting" it was quoted like these I missed and stuck in my subconscious over the pass years lmao ️
12/8/2020 c7 Guest
You wouldn't say "The thought of another human's eyes coming across she notebook," so don't say "The thought of another human's eyes coming across she and Edward's notebook."
Use HER. "The thought of another human's eyes coming across HER notebook." "The thought of another human's eyes coming across HER and Edward's notebook."
Simple. No?
You wouldn't say "The thought of another human's eyes coming across she notebook," so don't say "The thought of another human's eyes coming across she and Edward's notebook."
Use HER. "The thought of another human's eyes coming across HER notebook." "The thought of another human's eyes coming across HER and Edward's notebook."
Simple. No?
3/30/2020 c27 BellaTesoro
I'm confused. So Edward was put on medication for his...anxiety and it was doing a number on him? So he got over zealous in his love making and she didn't appreciate it because she felt he wasn't in his right mind? Hey he wasn't taking advantage of her, at that moment he needed this with her. But hey no means no...Does Edward have some other major mental health issue that needed serious meds that would mess him up like this? After the lovely last chapter this one is making me have whiplash.
I'm confused. So Edward was put on medication for his...anxiety and it was doing a number on him? So he got over zealous in his love making and she didn't appreciate it because she felt he wasn't in his right mind? Hey he wasn't taking advantage of her, at that moment he needed this with her. But hey no means no...Does Edward have some other major mental health issue that needed serious meds that would mess him up like this? After the lovely last chapter this one is making me have whiplash.