for Bare8/11/2013 c27 bookworm1234
I thought that the way you crafted this story was magnificent. Between the characters and plot you did a fantastic job!
I thought that the way you crafted this story was magnificent. Between the characters and plot you did a fantastic job!
8/7/2013 c6 Cullen Mascot
OK. You got me. I almost clicked away from the story. Couldn't figure out how this different from the original. Human of course...
Love the journal swapping idea!
OK. You got me. I almost clicked away from the story. Couldn't figure out how this different from the original. Human of course...
Love the journal swapping idea!
6/25/2013 c28 Guest
Isabella Marie Swan Edward Anthony Masen Elliot Charles Masen, Sterling Edward Masen, Eleanor Renee Masen, Drake Carlisle Masen, and Olivia Esme Masen
(Elliot, Sterling, Nora, Drake, and Olivia)
Mary Alice Brandon. Jasper Tobias Whitlock Trevor Emmett Whitlock, Stephanie Alice Whitlock, and Jacqueline Isabella Whitlock
(Trevor, Stephanie, and Jackie)
Rosalie Danielle Hale Emmett Axel McCarthy Daniel Jasper McCarthy and Sophia Rosalie McCarthy
(Danny and Sophie)
Jane Catherine Volter Liam Prescott Newton Sylvia Jane Newton and Kimberly Michaela Newton
(Sylvia and Kimmy)
Michael Theodore Newton Jessica Agatha StanleyRodney William Newton, Prescott James Stanley, Thomas Andrew Newton, Holly Jessica Stanley
(Rod, Scotty, Tom, and Holly)
Tyler Alexander Crowley Lauren Camille Mallory Josephine Lauren Crowley and Alexander Matthew Crowley
(Josie and Alex)
Eric Patrick Yorkie Irina Avery Denali Erin Patrice Yorkie, Noah Eric Yorkie and Madison Irina Yorkie
(Erin, Noah, and Maddie)
James Gordan Hunter Victoria Judith Scarlett Garth Victor Hunter and Mark Jude Hunter
(Garth and Mark)
Angela Annette Weber Benjamin Gregory Cheney Christopher Benjamin Cheney, Charlotte Angela Cheney, Charity Willa Cheney, Chelsea Margaret Cheney, Chad Dylan Cheney and Cherridan Annette Cheney
(Chris, Lottie, Rita, Chelsea, Chad, and Cherry)
Isabella Marie Swan Edward Anthony Masen Elliot Charles Masen, Sterling Edward Masen, Eleanor Renee Masen, Drake Carlisle Masen, and Olivia Esme Masen
(Elliot, Sterling, Nora, Drake, and Olivia)
Mary Alice Brandon. Jasper Tobias Whitlock Trevor Emmett Whitlock, Stephanie Alice Whitlock, and Jacqueline Isabella Whitlock
(Trevor, Stephanie, and Jackie)
Rosalie Danielle Hale Emmett Axel McCarthy Daniel Jasper McCarthy and Sophia Rosalie McCarthy
(Danny and Sophie)
Jane Catherine Volter Liam Prescott Newton Sylvia Jane Newton and Kimberly Michaela Newton
(Sylvia and Kimmy)
Michael Theodore Newton Jessica Agatha StanleyRodney William Newton, Prescott James Stanley, Thomas Andrew Newton, Holly Jessica Stanley
(Rod, Scotty, Tom, and Holly)
Tyler Alexander Crowley Lauren Camille Mallory Josephine Lauren Crowley and Alexander Matthew Crowley
(Josie and Alex)
Eric Patrick Yorkie Irina Avery Denali Erin Patrice Yorkie, Noah Eric Yorkie and Madison Irina Yorkie
(Erin, Noah, and Maddie)
James Gordan Hunter Victoria Judith Scarlett Garth Victor Hunter and Mark Jude Hunter
(Garth and Mark)
Angela Annette Weber Benjamin Gregory Cheney Christopher Benjamin Cheney, Charlotte Angela Cheney, Charity Willa Cheney, Chelsea Margaret Cheney, Chad Dylan Cheney and Cherridan Annette Cheney
(Chris, Lottie, Rita, Chelsea, Chad, and Cherry)
6/18/2013 c28 AshenGrayLady
Love this story, i want to put in the pocket of my heart and carry it around forever...
Love this story, i want to put in the pocket of my heart and carry it around forever...
6/3/2013 c26 meleelove
Found this story, couldn't stop reading, 'twas really good. At the beginning I thought it had a tinged of cliched fanfic but as it progressed I became enthralled by the story. Really well written, glad it was third person, very refreshing to read. And did anyone else get nervous when Edward asked Bella to be careful driving in the snow, I had a feeling she was going to die. Once again great story, kind of long review but I wait until I'm done reading a story until I review it:) thank you.
Found this story, couldn't stop reading, 'twas really good. At the beginning I thought it had a tinged of cliched fanfic but as it progressed I became enthralled by the story. Really well written, glad it was third person, very refreshing to read. And did anyone else get nervous when Edward asked Bella to be careful driving in the snow, I had a feeling she was going to die. Once again great story, kind of long review but I wait until I'm done reading a story until I review it:) thank you.
5/28/2013 c17 Guest
so so so so goooooooood
so so so so goooooooood
5/24/2013 c28 
7Lizzie Paige
Thoroughly enjoyed this story. Such a tortured Edward but I loved the way he interacted with his family and then Bella. Thanks for sharing these characters with us :)
7Lizzie PaigeThoroughly enjoyed this story. Such a tortured Edward but I loved the way he interacted with his family and then Bella. Thanks for sharing these characters with us :)
5/11/2013 c28 guardianangel marie
Totally amazing! I LOVED this story! It is perfectly written, and it also upped my vocabulary! So thank you for that.
I absolutely loved it! Keep up the TOTALLY WICKED work! XDXDXD
Totally amazing! I LOVED this story! It is perfectly written, and it also upped my vocabulary! So thank you for that.
I absolutely loved it! Keep up the TOTALLY WICKED work! XDXDXD
5/3/2013 c1 5DreamsofaDreamer
First chapter downed, and I must say (pardon my language) holey shit. Your writing is so devastatingly mesmerizing. So entirely different from most authors - a slight lyricism to your words. I can't wait to read more!
5DreamsofaDreamerFirst chapter downed, and I must say (pardon my language) holey shit. Your writing is so devastatingly mesmerizing. So entirely different from most authors - a slight lyricism to your words. I can't wait to read more!