for Bare3/30/2020 c25 BellaTesoro
I wish I could see that painting Edward did of Bella and himself. So Bella wrote the word Bare on his painting? Her words on his art, perfect.
I wish I could see that painting Edward did of Bella and himself. So Bella wrote the word Bare on his painting? Her words on his art, perfect.
3/30/2020 c24 BellaTesoro
Oh the ring painting scene was perfection. Made me tear up. I think you are like these two characters, your artistic value is in your words. Like Edward paints beautiful pictures, you paint them with your deep words. Lovely.
Oh the ring painting scene was perfection. Made me tear up. I think you are like these two characters, your artistic value is in your words. Like Edward paints beautiful pictures, you paint them with your deep words. Lovely.
3/29/2020 c23 BellaTesoro
Wow, even after mad passionate love making and Bella finally had her first orgasm during intercourse she still managed to be silly about the whole thing. I mean why get up so quickly after such an intense love making? Her first thoughts after all that passion is to go straight to telling him...ick...I've got to clean this shit off asap. Ah, but they are teens, I forget. Great family meeting to flesh out the miscommunication between them all.
Wow, even after mad passionate love making and Bella finally had her first orgasm during intercourse she still managed to be silly about the whole thing. I mean why get up so quickly after such an intense love making? Her first thoughts after all that passion is to go straight to telling him...ick...I've got to clean this shit off asap. Ah, but they are teens, I forget. Great family meeting to flesh out the miscommunication between them all.
3/29/2020 c22 BellaTesoro
It must have been uncomfortable for Bella to realize Edward had easily found a friend to confide in and for that brief time she thought maybe he was moving on from her. But of course she had the same thing with Mike at work when he filled that same kind of roll, maybe not as colorful as Jane was. But in the end the trip to meet her did fuel this, hopefully finally round of learning to trust again...Bravo that Edward went to a psychiatrist.
It must have been uncomfortable for Bella to realize Edward had easily found a friend to confide in and for that brief time she thought maybe he was moving on from her. But of course she had the same thing with Mike at work when he filled that same kind of roll, maybe not as colorful as Jane was. But in the end the trip to meet her did fuel this, hopefully finally round of learning to trust again...Bravo that Edward went to a psychiatrist.
3/29/2020 c21 BellaTesoro
Who knew Mike would be so insightful?! And he thinks he's not smart, he got Bella to think about her motives and her actions in a realistic way. Got her to make the first move back to Edward and sadly it seems Edward is even more fragile than she realized. Alice was right to give her the low down about her brother's issues and the hope they had when Bella entered his life. But this is to complicated for two 18 year olds can fix on their own. I hope they get some help.
Who knew Mike would be so insightful?! And he thinks he's not smart, he got Bella to think about her motives and her actions in a realistic way. Got her to make the first move back to Edward and sadly it seems Edward is even more fragile than she realized. Alice was right to give her the low down about her brother's issues and the hope they had when Bella entered his life. But this is to complicated for two 18 year olds can fix on their own. I hope they get some help.
3/29/2020 c20 BellaTesoro
I really admire Alice in this situation. Sure she's Bella's bestie but family comes first is right, especially given this situation. Alice explained her point of view very logically, Edward has problems, they were hoping that Bella would have eased what has broken him and eventually he would seek out help professionally if this all continued to interfere with his every day living, that's would the ultimatum should have been if anything. Either you go get help or...Even that would be harsh. How about talking it over with the adults in his life and seeking out help together. And Esme giving the job back to the other worker, seems coincidental but maybe it's true it was only a temporary job after all.
I really admire Alice in this situation. Sure she's Bella's bestie but family comes first is right, especially given this situation. Alice explained her point of view very logically, Edward has problems, they were hoping that Bella would have eased what has broken him and eventually he would seek out help professionally if this all continued to interfere with his every day living, that's would the ultimatum should have been if anything. Either you go get help or...Even that would be harsh. How about talking it over with the adults in his life and seeking out help together. And Esme giving the job back to the other worker, seems coincidental but maybe it's true it was only a temporary job after all.
3/29/2020 c19 BellaTesoro
It's hard to fathom someone like this Rosalie, one so loving and warm and maternal that isn't comfortable with hugging. I really liked this Rosalie so when Bella was giving her her heartfelt goodbye and even tearing up, it's odd that Rose wouldn't feel comfortable hugging Bella whom she seems to have really cared about.
And then there's Edward who thinks he has more power than, well God I guess. Very arogant of him to think just because he does something he can cause a death or in this case an accident playing football for Bella. Was Bella right to give him an ultimatum, not in my opinion but then we wouldn't have the New Moon part of leaving because I know what's best for you more than you know yourself...oh teen angst.
It's hard to fathom someone like this Rosalie, one so loving and warm and maternal that isn't comfortable with hugging. I really liked this Rosalie so when Bella was giving her her heartfelt goodbye and even tearing up, it's odd that Rose wouldn't feel comfortable hugging Bella whom she seems to have really cared about.
And then there's Edward who thinks he has more power than, well God I guess. Very arogant of him to think just because he does something he can cause a death or in this case an accident playing football for Bella. Was Bella right to give him an ultimatum, not in my opinion but then we wouldn't have the New Moon part of leaving because I know what's best for you more than you know yourself...oh teen angst.
3/29/2020 c18 BellaTesoro
I appreciated Bella's question to Esme and Esme's honest answer about love and first love lasting forever and what the reality of love really was. Edward coming to pick Bella up when stranded by a dead battery and telling her honestly why he won't paint her, well I appreciate the honest communication without too much slow burn, it felt honest and real.
I appreciated Bella's question to Esme and Esme's honest answer about love and first love lasting forever and what the reality of love really was. Edward coming to pick Bella up when stranded by a dead battery and telling her honestly why he won't paint her, well I appreciate the honest communication without too much slow burn, it felt honest and real.
3/28/2020 c17 BellaTesoro
I know some girls have pain their first times but Bella made it sound like she was just letting him at her and not into it at all for the pain and then when it was over she thinks to herself...he apologized because it wasn't good and she couldn't think of it being better...Maybe she should have used the words she so loves to tell him that so the poor guy wouldn't feel like such a loser for making her first time so icky, or so he thinks.
I know some girls have pain their first times but Bella made it sound like she was just letting him at her and not into it at all for the pain and then when it was over she thinks to herself...he apologized because it wasn't good and she couldn't think of it being better...Maybe she should have used the words she so loves to tell him that so the poor guy wouldn't feel like such a loser for making her first time so icky, or so he thinks.
3/28/2020 c16 BellaTesoro
The kids coming to Settle and surprise Bella was great as was Edward returning later to her room after Carlisle went to sleep...He pleasured her well...I guess he's trying to teach her what it is like to receive pleasure even though she was freaked out. You'd think she would have at least tried to reciprocate, poor boy probably went home with blue balls. So just when did Edward have this Tanya relationship I wonder. I'm guessing he painted her and she died too and that's why he's rather reluctant or was to have another love in his life.
The kids coming to Settle and surprise Bella was great as was Edward returning later to her room after Carlisle went to sleep...He pleasured her well...I guess he's trying to teach her what it is like to receive pleasure even though she was freaked out. You'd think she would have at least tried to reciprocate, poor boy probably went home with blue balls. So just when did Edward have this Tanya relationship I wonder. I'm guessing he painted her and she died too and that's why he's rather reluctant or was to have another love in his life.
3/28/2020 c15 BellaTesoro
I've been meaning to question Bella describing Edward's hibs like those of a woman, meaning curved because in general a woman's hips are curved. It's odd that these two teens are on one hand like old souls, people with a lot of maturity and then they are described like silly teens. For example Edward rushing out with a sheet around him in order to quickly paint and in runs Bella (she's always invading his private space) and she sees a man's nude body the first time and her reaction is so silly for someone who loves this Edward and seems to get mature love I guess she really doesn't. I don't blame Edward for starting to feel emasculated by her at time.
I've been meaning to question Bella describing Edward's hibs like those of a woman, meaning curved because in general a woman's hips are curved. It's odd that these two teens are on one hand like old souls, people with a lot of maturity and then they are described like silly teens. For example Edward rushing out with a sheet around him in order to quickly paint and in runs Bella (she's always invading his private space) and she sees a man's nude body the first time and her reaction is so silly for someone who loves this Edward and seems to get mature love I guess she really doesn't. I don't blame Edward for starting to feel emasculated by her at time.
3/28/2020 c14 BellaTesoro
I was a bit confused. I thought they had 'gone all the way' or was that Bella's dream and then when she woke up he..'dry humped her' and that's why he had to change his pants? And then he gave her her first boy fingers in her? In any event, it was a very sensual scene, just a little lost as to the reality of it all.
I was a bit confused. I thought they had 'gone all the way' or was that Bella's dream and then when she woke up he..'dry humped her' and that's why he had to change his pants? And then he gave her her first boy fingers in her? In any event, it was a very sensual scene, just a little lost as to the reality of it all.
3/28/2020 c13 BellaTesoro
Clearly Edward is hiding some other part of his life, one where Kate the server certainly knows him but is trying not to let on. That's not fair to Bella if he's hiding something and at the same time wanting her to trust him. Bella is ready to have sex with Edward, that's clear enough. I hope she's got protection, although I'm sure he's got some experience in that department so he's probably got that covered. I thought Bella was right, their date wasn't perfect, why because she and also he keep sending up road blocks with asking uncomfortable questions. Yet she's still ready to give him all her firsts and she's in love, why not, she cares for him he seems too as well.
Clearly Edward is hiding some other part of his life, one where Kate the server certainly knows him but is trying not to let on. That's not fair to Bella if he's hiding something and at the same time wanting her to trust him. Bella is ready to have sex with Edward, that's clear enough. I hope she's got protection, although I'm sure he's got some experience in that department so he's probably got that covered. I thought Bella was right, their date wasn't perfect, why because she and also he keep sending up road blocks with asking uncomfortable questions. Yet she's still ready to give him all her firsts and she's in love, why not, she cares for him he seems too as well.
3/28/2020 c12 BellaTesoro
It seemed totally out of character for Bella to go off on Edward because he was throwing pebbles at her window to get her attention. She was insulted for her reputation that he didn't go to the door...really? She's slept with him for several nights, made it clear she's all in for whatever with him and she gets pissed off when he goes to her this way? How about not make him feel like it was a disrespectful thing to do and just explain herself if she felt that way, which as I said seems very hypocritical of her. But hey they made up with some red paint so it all turned out ok in the end.
It seemed totally out of character for Bella to go off on Edward because he was throwing pebbles at her window to get her attention. She was insulted for her reputation that he didn't go to the door...really? She's slept with him for several nights, made it clear she's all in for whatever with him and she gets pissed off when he goes to her this way? How about not make him feel like it was a disrespectful thing to do and just explain herself if she felt that way, which as I said seems very hypocritical of her. But hey they made up with some red paint so it all turned out ok in the end.
3/28/2020 c11 BellaTesoro
I could feel Bella's joy with mixing her life, Charlie and she and then joining with the Cullens as they prepared for dinner with the parents night. I so get Charlie being bold and speaking his mind about the Cullen's odd pairings within the family and the teens being paired up. Sure Carlisle made a good argument and Charlie the cop bought it but to have Edward say to Bella in the text that Carlisle just lied to a cop...well just what are these parents telling these young people about closing their eyes to their sleeping together. I know my questions make it seem I don't approve and on one level I don't but as far as for this fiction it's way cool. So it seems natural that young Bella and Edward be brought into the pairings this opening and easily and hormonal teens want what they want and looks like Bella is going to get what she wants since she just got her first kiss, and she says it was stolen, I beg to differ she gave it more than willingly. Why does Edward think he is going to burn Bella? He tells her to have some self worth and yet he has none.
I could feel Bella's joy with mixing her life, Charlie and she and then joining with the Cullens as they prepared for dinner with the parents night. I so get Charlie being bold and speaking his mind about the Cullen's odd pairings within the family and the teens being paired up. Sure Carlisle made a good argument and Charlie the cop bought it but to have Edward say to Bella in the text that Carlisle just lied to a cop...well just what are these parents telling these young people about closing their eyes to their sleeping together. I know my questions make it seem I don't approve and on one level I don't but as far as for this fiction it's way cool. So it seems natural that young Bella and Edward be brought into the pairings this opening and easily and hormonal teens want what they want and looks like Bella is going to get what she wants since she just got her first kiss, and she says it was stolen, I beg to differ she gave it more than willingly. Why does Edward think he is going to burn Bella? He tells her to have some self worth and yet he has none.