for Bare3/28/2020 c10 BellaTesoro
Edward's reveal about his past was very heartbreaking. I take it Carlisle and Esme are cool with their teenage kids sleeping with the opposite sex since Bella spent the night in Edward's...even though they just held each other, it was sweet as was Bella waking up and finding Edward playing The River Runs Through You...
Edward's reveal about his past was very heartbreaking. I take it Carlisle and Esme are cool with their teenage kids sleeping with the opposite sex since Bella spent the night in Edward's...even though they just held each other, it was sweet as was Bella waking up and finding Edward playing The River Runs Through You...
3/28/2020 c9 BellaTesoro
Edward showing up at Bella's in the dark hours of night, that alone is very intimate and their conversation under the light of the moon as he sketches her...very moving. And lastly, the returned notebook with the erotic picture of the octopus all over the woman's body...yeah sweet dreams...he's looking for more than to be friends. I'd say he wants to be all her firsts...
Edward showing up at Bella's in the dark hours of night, that alone is very intimate and their conversation under the light of the moon as he sketches her...very moving. And lastly, the returned notebook with the erotic picture of the octopus all over the woman's body...yeah sweet dreams...he's looking for more than to be friends. I'd say he wants to be all her firsts...
3/28/2020 c8 BellaTesoro
This chapter went from silly teen thoughts and actions to some seriously mature thoughts and actions. Edward and Bella in the meadow and Edward's soliloquy about what it means to paint someone and how intimate and soul capturing it is...just wow. Deep stuff in this chapter and yet, these two teens who seem to want to give their souls to each other as Bella so profoundly suggested, didn't even steal a kiss from each other, although Bella at least wanted to.
This chapter went from silly teen thoughts and actions to some seriously mature thoughts and actions. Edward and Bella in the meadow and Edward's soliloquy about what it means to paint someone and how intimate and soul capturing it is...just wow. Deep stuff in this chapter and yet, these two teens who seem to want to give their souls to each other as Bella so profoundly suggested, didn't even steal a kiss from each other, although Bella at least wanted to.
3/27/2020 c6 BellaTesoro
I get Edward has some deep seeded problems, and looks like we are about to hear about them, but going back to Bella and Edward riding in the truck, and Edward upset over the song playing on the radio, he had no right to grab at Bella's wrist and hurt her, that's quite abusive and Bella had every right to be angry at him. She shouldn't have given him a pass on that behavior just because he comes to her rescue yet again.
I get Edward has some deep seeded problems, and looks like we are about to hear about them, but going back to Bella and Edward riding in the truck, and Edward upset over the song playing on the radio, he had no right to grab at Bella's wrist and hurt her, that's quite abusive and Bella had every right to be angry at him. She shouldn't have given him a pass on that behavior just because he comes to her rescue yet again.
3/27/2020 c5 BellaTesoro
Bella was wrong to go into Edward's bedroom and uncover his art work and just stand there and look at it when she wasn't invited to do so. So Edward reading her words, equally invading one's private space is wrong but they seem to have forgiven those invasions. So Alice is the biological child and Edward is the adopted one of the bunch. I gather his backstory will explain why he's so broken. And everyone seems to just accept Edward as he is. Are they not having him deal with his issues instead of just glossing over them?
Bella was wrong to go into Edward's bedroom and uncover his art work and just stand there and look at it when she wasn't invited to do so. So Edward reading her words, equally invading one's private space is wrong but they seem to have forgiven those invasions. So Alice is the biological child and Edward is the adopted one of the bunch. I gather his backstory will explain why he's so broken. And everyone seems to just accept Edward as he is. Are they not having him deal with his issues instead of just glossing over them?
3/27/2020 c4 BellaTesoro
Good for Bella not buying into Edward's sketch of her or the way she feels about her 'lack of beauty'...oh teens.
Good for Bella not buying into Edward's sketch of her or the way she feels about her 'lack of beauty'...oh teens.
3/27/2020 c3 BellaTesoro
What is Edward's problem I wonder? Sounds like he's an emo teen, missing school being a difficult brother and I guess son. At least he was able to save Bella from the infamous Van verses old truck.
What is Edward's problem I wonder? Sounds like he's an emo teen, missing school being a difficult brother and I guess son. At least he was able to save Bella from the infamous Van verses old truck.
3/27/2020 c2 BellaTesoro
I take it these Cullens are not vampires. But Edward has some sort of a problem with Bella. What could that be since they don't even know each other or have been in each other's presence yet. Oh high school drama...it's really not my favorite kind of setting to read. But this one seems very interesting.
I take it these Cullens are not vampires. But Edward has some sort of a problem with Bella. What could that be since they don't even know each other or have been in each other's presence yet. Oh high school drama...it's really not my favorite kind of setting to read. But this one seems very interesting.
3/27/2020 c1 BellaTesoro
I know I must have read this before and yet I see no review so perhaps I haven't. In any case this first chapter was very good. I have lots of questions. Like I wonder why Bella is so lacking in self confidence. She seems to have no self worth. I see some of the cannon Twilight E/B so far. Wonder if there will be more. I'm in for a first read or perhaps even a re read on my part. Seems fresh to me either way.
I know I must have read this before and yet I see no review so perhaps I haven't. In any case this first chapter was very good. I have lots of questions. Like I wonder why Bella is so lacking in self confidence. She seems to have no self worth. I see some of the cannon Twilight E/B so far. Wonder if there will be more. I'm in for a first read or perhaps even a re read on my part. Seems fresh to me either way.
11/19/2019 c26 
10madelinecoffee
This is exactly Edward and Bella. It’s beautiful and soulful and it made me cry. Thank you for your art.
10madelinecoffeeThis is exactly Edward and Bella. It’s beautiful and soulful and it made me cry. Thank you for your art.
8/16/2019 c28 Guest
I hated this Bella in some chapters. The first love is allways an interesting reading, but I feel me more identified with Esme.
Thanks for your time
Regards
LQUEZ
I hated this Bella in some chapters. The first love is allways an interesting reading, but I feel me more identified with Esme.
Thanks for your time
Regards
LQUEZ
2/5/2019 c11 J140
This story is so full of raw emotion so far, I‘m literally soaking it up.
Also, Rosalies character is a special little treat in your story.
This story is so full of raw emotion so far, I‘m literally soaking it up.
Also, Rosalies character is a special little treat in your story.
12/22/2018 c28 Justchillingandliving
Wow! This story. I have no words. The characters were so complex and invoking of emotion. Excellent Job.
Wow! This story. I have no words. The characters were so complex and invoking of emotion. Excellent Job.
11/12/2018 c21 AmandaGrey13
Your story is absolutely amazing. The way you write stirs up emotion in a way I can't describe. Every chapter is beyond beautiful I can't stop reading.
Your story is absolutely amazing. The way you write stirs up emotion in a way I can't describe. Every chapter is beyond beautiful I can't stop reading.