for Dreams do come true6/18/2009 c7 
10MISTALI
That was brilliant! I was right all along. I think I'm psychic. Please update soon.
10MISTALIThat was brilliant! I was right all along. I think I'm psychic. Please update soon.
6/17/2009 c3 White Firez
I reveiwed this chapter seeing as I didn't have enough time to reveiw for the others!
your a good writter, I like how you've done what almost every big KH fan would want, Lolz XD.
Oh and I'm not a big fan...I just think it's awsomes! n.n
anyway, I'll read the rest and reveiw soons!
3 Firez
I reveiwed this chapter seeing as I didn't have enough time to reveiw for the others!
your a good writter, I like how you've done what almost every big KH fan would want, Lolz XD.
Oh and I'm not a big fan...I just think it's awsomes! n.n
anyway, I'll read the rest and reveiw soons!
3 Firez
6/17/2009 c6 MISTALI
Cool. If your not using any POV's you could say Normal POV. It just makes it a little easier. I'm not criticizing you, Christ no. It's just a little something. You don't have to use it though. Brilliant otherwise.
Cool. If your not using any POV's you could say Normal POV. It just makes it a little easier. I'm not criticizing you, Christ no. It's just a little something. You don't have to use it though. Brilliant otherwise.
6/16/2009 c5 MISTALI
Class. Roxas is so cheeky, but that's why he's friends with nearly everyone. Screw Seifer and his "Mates"
Class. Roxas is so cheeky, but that's why he's friends with nearly everyone. Screw Seifer and his "Mates"
6/9/2009 c3 MISTALI
Cool chapter. Poor Ria fainting. She wouldn't be on her own for wanting to meet organisation 13. (I wasn't sure who they were at first so I looked them up on Google.)
Cool chapter. Poor Ria fainting. She wouldn't be on her own for wanting to meet organisation 13. (I wasn't sure who they were at first so I looked them up on Google.)
6/6/2009 c1 MISTALI
Brilliant story. I can see you're going to do well. (I know you told me not to judge it but it does look like it will have success. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. GO ROXAS! 9You know what I'm like)
Brilliant story. I can see you're going to do well. (I know you told me not to judge it but it does look like it will have success. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. GO ROXAS! 9You know what I'm like)