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3/9/2013 c17 5Regin
I Love, I Like, I Lust!Please Update Soon!
5/22/2010 c17 negligibleSanity
Quphi! Is it! *squee*

...ignore that...

Lovely aurebesh spelling, Az. And yet again we get Chelsea's sarcasm and Olive's attempt at understanding it... Great chapter. And yeah, I am laughing at you for looking for the wrong chapter. Haha. :D Well done for finally finding it. ;P

-Artemis
5/20/2010 c17 494yellow 14
Request permission to lol at your 'blonde moment' (The stereotype, not necessarily the same as an actual blonde.) Good to see this stories still alive, I'd actually forgotten about it. Nice cliffie, keep updating
5/20/2010 c17 15Khaz-Calowiel
Lol- I actually had to re-read chapter 16 to understand what was happening!

PLEASE TELL ME THE LAST BIT OF THE CHAPTER IS AS IT SEEMS!

I'm really getting hooked on this story!
5/19/2010 c17 101Jedi Master Misty Sman-Esay
Glad your back!

Learning any language is hard but I hear Navajo is the hardest.

So is she going to try to live in the desert again?
3/7/2010 c16 1Prof. Egghead
friggen awesom piece soph. or az. or whatever the hell your name is. Had to do some star wars research to get the more obscure references. you have a skill for getting to the point. nice portrails of emotion. some good subtle but not too subtle references to various things. maybe in early chapters make it a bit clearer that qui gon is a force ghost for those not familiar with star wars lore. maybe i am just oblivious. great piece of work. will be mighty impressed if you can slot in a track youth theatre reference. "yeah, that is my uncle" says character A, "oh, ok, he is a bit weird..." says character B uncomfortably as uncle scribles something into a notebook. "yeah he is trying to make a machine to turn people into superheroes..." explains character A with a look tha says she is not convinced he will suceed (because meanies will interfere) catch my drift? for all those not familiar with the play 'superheroes'. this message will have seemed increadibly odd. my bad.
12/26/2009 c16 9TurtleFeathers
Keep writing. I love the humor. :)
12/26/2009 c15 TurtleFeathers
We! XD
12/26/2009 c14 TurtleFeathers
Pie... LoL. ^^
12/10/2009 c16 13darthritter86
Still would like plot...romance, adventure, drama, something. Though is was still a good chapter and I'm happy to see that your still at it.

Keep it frosty and keep at peace.
12/10/2009 c16 494yellow 14
An interesting idea. Very good, keep updating.
12/10/2009 c16 101Jedi Master Misty Sman-Esay
She seems to be adjusting.

I have a feeling though that Olive will always be trapped in two worlds. Unless she continues to change her thinking.
12/10/2009 c16 negligibleSanity
Oh, I can see the purple now... Great chapter. Not that I hadn't read most of it before, but still. Good to see she's being taught Aurebesh. And Olive, how did you not notice your arm was broken? Jeeze...

Loyally reviewing like the dog I am,

-Artemis
10/31/2009 c15 Maid of Mist
Love the ending! Brilliant!
10/27/2009 c15 15Khaz-Calowiel
You know it's good when you're on the edge of your seat the second time round.

Love it, Az.

Lavie.
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