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8/27/2011 c2 jade
i like your story.
7/30/2011 c2 hgf5
good
7/30/2011 c2 Mionicale
I love ur story personally so dont be offended when i ssay this...i only mean it as constructive critiscism... while ur writing is good i have seen many a story that go into too much detail (such ur description of a characters clothes) that make the story lose focus thus taking away from ur awesome writing skills..in reality it does not matter what they r really wearing unless truly vital to a story...but i wud luv 4 u to continue cuz i luv this story...thank u 4 ur time

Sincerely,

Mionicale XD
1/30/2011 c1 5AniHitachiinLover
aaaaahhhhh it was good haha i wonder what souta was going to say haha please update sooon \(^.^)/

-AniHitachiinLover
1/10/2010 c1 3Ravenclaw's Kitten
This is really good. I like it and hopw to see more out soon! I have two suggestions for who Souta whouls be paired with, if you aren't opposed to writing yaoi. Either Shippo, or Inuyasha. Either would be pretty cool.

Much love and thanks

~Kiza
6/10/2009 c1 Queen Baka
Update! Or there will be flames! Jk but plz update soon
6/10/2009 c1 4RebornRose1992
kool.kool.great job. not sure about souta.
6/10/2009 c1 4Serenity Dinago
lol more please
6/10/2009 c1 takengoddess
awesome
6/10/2009 c1 Rhianna224
I love it
6/10/2009 c1 7Science Queen
I like this story.I think souta should be paired with rin.(they would make a cute couple)

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