for Summer Daze, Austen Nights6/19/2009 c2 
1Tyr Ice
Hi just want to say that this story is really good. I love to read Pride and Prejudice every chance I get and I can tell you that your doing a great job. As for the authenticity of the language don't worry about it just remember not to shorten words and use cuss words. The strongest word they would use is probable crap, god and oh no.
Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading some more.
1Tyr IceHi just want to say that this story is really good. I love to read Pride and Prejudice every chance I get and I can tell you that your doing a great job. As for the authenticity of the language don't worry about it just remember not to shorten words and use cuss words. The strongest word they would use is probable crap, god and oh no.
Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading some more.
6/19/2009 c2 2allucinatoris
okay you have officially intriuged me - Jane austen is the only classic author i really enjoy
I definately like it so far
2allucinatorisokay you have officially intriuged me - Jane austen is the only classic author i really enjoy
I definately like it so far
6/10/2009 c1 1Eternally Inquisitive
Amazing! I love Jane Austen's books so this is like the best of both books :S
1Eternally InquisitiveAmazing! I love Jane Austen's books so this is like the best of both books :S
6/10/2009 c1 aragornnme
I'm excited, considering your other stories, where you're thinking of going with this. I love "In the Grip...", so I was excited to see a historical piece from you. It's pretty mundane at the moment, but you have much more exciting things planned, I'm sure.
I had a few issues with language and modern slang, especially since this is set in Regency England. The 'wait up' at the beginning made me twitch a bit. Antiquating the language takes time and more page space, so be careful. Also, a few facts, such as the post being sent on a Sunday, seems off, but I can't be entirely sure of that.
Anywho, I'll look forward to the next section, and I'm glad that you, of all authors, is tackling one of these. Thanks!
Happy writing,
Arien
I'm excited, considering your other stories, where you're thinking of going with this. I love "In the Grip...", so I was excited to see a historical piece from you. It's pretty mundane at the moment, but you have much more exciting things planned, I'm sure.
I had a few issues with language and modern slang, especially since this is set in Regency England. The 'wait up' at the beginning made me twitch a bit. Antiquating the language takes time and more page space, so be careful. Also, a few facts, such as the post being sent on a Sunday, seems off, but I can't be entirely sure of that.
Anywho, I'll look forward to the next section, and I'm glad that you, of all authors, is tackling one of these. Thanks!
Happy writing,
Arien
6/10/2009 c1 2BrooksideHals
Oh my gosh! This is a really good plot! I love your stories! They are different from stories I've read and that is what I like most! Your awesome! Lol.
2BrooksideHalsOh my gosh! This is a really good plot! I love your stories! They are different from stories I've read and that is what I like most! Your awesome! Lol.
6/10/2009 c1 edwar cullens little sister
I really like this chapter I hope you keep on writing this story it seems like something I would be checking my e mails more so I know when you update on it I can't wait until the next chapter,
Keep writing!
I really like this chapter I hope you keep on writing this story it seems like something I would be checking my e mails more so I know when you update on it I can't wait until the next chapter,
Keep writing!
6/10/2009 c1 16anythingzombie
This is quite refresing, (and I'm not talking about my fountain soda) I've never read anything from Jane Austen, which I feel horrid about. I'm aware of her work, but not yours. I really like this so far, and I can't wait for more.
Great job.
16anythingzombieThis is quite refresing, (and I'm not talking about my fountain soda) I've never read anything from Jane Austen, which I feel horrid about. I'm aware of her work, but not yours. I really like this so far, and I can't wait for more.
Great job.