for Forks School Of Performing Arts:Twisted1/25/2010 c8 WolfNamedFallynn
Thanks chika...and if nothing else im starting this story right now kk? love ya chika, call meh when you can cause we certainly miss your lame tale!
~ALEX,Missy,Carsey,Lizzy!
Thanks chika...and if nothing else im starting this story right now kk? love ya chika, call meh when you can cause we certainly miss your lame tale!
~ALEX,Missy,Carsey,Lizzy!
12/20/2009 c3 
1MissTwilghtLover6
i like the story 2 bad ur not contining and im over edward && bella story\ies i would love 2 read a jasper && bella story i jst hope u continue
1MissTwilghtLover6i like the story 2 bad ur not contining and im over edward && bella story\ies i would love 2 read a jasper && bella story i jst hope u continue
6/23/2009 c3 1iwanttodeletethisaccount01
OMG! Please make it a Jasper/Bella one! PLEASE!
And please dont lose interest in this story, I LOVE IT!
Love this story, still, and promise me you'll get the next chapter up soon! I REALLY want to read it!
1iwanttodeletethisaccount01OMG! Please make it a Jasper/Bella one! PLEASE!
And please dont lose interest in this story, I LOVE IT!
Love this story, still, and promise me you'll get the next chapter up soon! I REALLY want to read it!
6/22/2009 c3 1sunhippie105
i like the whole bella and jasper together thing i think its cool. not that i don't love bella and edward but its just every single story is a different way they can fall in love it gets old i like when people shake it up
1sunhippie105i like the whole bella and jasper together thing i think its cool. not that i don't love bella and edward but its just every single story is a different way they can fall in love it gets old i like when people shake it up
6/22/2009 c1 crawfish4
OMG reviewing fr the next chapter of the story lol...I like the plot as in many of your other storirs ;)
OMG reviewing fr the next chapter of the story lol...I like the plot as in many of your other storirs ;)
6/17/2009 c1 1iwanttodeletethisaccount01
love it! Please continue, Love your story, plot and your writing style! Please continue
1iwanttodeletethisaccount01love it! Please continue, Love your story, plot and your writing style! Please continue
6/10/2009 c1 19xyz.vivace
That's a lot to ask, babe. Do flames count? O.o
I'm just going to say that there are a LOT of grammatical mistakes in this chapter. The plot is a little overused, too.
And you are supposed to put spaces after commas and periods.
I would suggest a good beta reader.
19xyz.vivaceThat's a lot to ask, babe. Do flames count? O.o
I'm just going to say that there are a LOT of grammatical mistakes in this chapter. The plot is a little overused, too.
And you are supposed to put spaces after commas and periods.
I would suggest a good beta reader.