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1/12/2010 c1 35Shinichi06
This was really cute. Adorable story.
6/12/2009 c1 73The-Lady-Smaell
Wow... That's all I can say. Without doubt one of the most poignant things I've read in a while. The last paragraph made me smile. Beautifully written, well paced and genuinely touching. Superb, I can't find a fault ^_^
6/11/2009 c1 Harrharr
This was really good!

I must admit that the transitions could be smoother.

However, the point of this story was told really well, and the way that Naruto referred to him and Gaara as jars was really nice.
6/11/2009 c1 8Cheetara
Now that's deep man. Really deep.

The editing could use a little work, but ...

Good work

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