for Kitsune Shinigami6/16/2009 c10 
1OverLordRevan
can't wait till next chapter...lol should of had him ask yoruichi to merry him, could've mad it an on going joke "if" he lives...this story is funny
1OverLordRevancan't wait till next chapter...lol should of had him ask yoruichi to merry him, could've mad it an on going joke "if" he lives...this story is funny
6/16/2009 c10 The Rogue Hero
NO YOU KILLED NARUTO I HATE YOU HE WAS TO YOUNG HE ONLY JUST MET HIS FATHER AND MOTHER NO ASSHOLE LMAO HES GONNA BE BACK I KNOW IT YOU CANT KEEP A GUY LIKE NARUTO IN A GRAVE FOR LONG
NO YOU KILLED NARUTO I HATE YOU HE WAS TO YOUNG HE ONLY JUST MET HIS FATHER AND MOTHER NO ASSHOLE LMAO HES GONNA BE BACK I KNOW IT YOU CANT KEEP A GUY LIKE NARUTO IN A GRAVE FOR LONG
6/16/2009 c9 1OverLordRevan
i didn't see that comming great chapter i think he should die for a little bit in the next chapter they hold a funeral...and while like that that kyubi keeping his brain active while the hollow kills the poison
1OverLordRevani didn't see that comming great chapter i think he should die for a little bit in the next chapter they hold a funeral...and while like that that kyubi keeping his brain active while the hollow kills the poison
6/15/2009 c9 3PudgySasquatch
kaiju is counfused big time so i'm guessing this saya adopted naruto or what ugh me brain hurt well good job any ways peace.
3PudgySasquatchkaiju is counfused big time so i'm guessing this saya adopted naruto or what ugh me brain hurt well good job any ways peace.
6/15/2009 c8 13HikariNoTenshi-San
Oh shit Minato, you in for it now! And wait until he learns he's his son! XD It'll be CHAOS! UPdate!
13HikariNoTenshi-SanOh shit Minato, you in for it now! And wait until he learns he's his son! XD It'll be CHAOS! UPdate!
6/15/2009 c1 ChibiCraft
well, at first it looked like it might be a relatively interesting story but then you kinda went and ruined it.
several things bugged me:
why would foxes, wolves, and especially deer and other animals of prey work together?
i mean most of them would rather eat each other after all.
the tag. i mean, come on!
naruto goes suddenly from konoha to karakura with little to no time transition, or distance. you don't explain how a ninja village could exist in such close proximity.
and lastly, the whole shinigami thing. no introduction to how it came to be, nothing, just him going off to fight hollows.
etc
too many holes in the story for me to continue.
well, at first it looked like it might be a relatively interesting story but then you kinda went and ruined it.
several things bugged me:
why would foxes, wolves, and especially deer and other animals of prey work together?
i mean most of them would rather eat each other after all.
the tag. i mean, come on!
naruto goes suddenly from konoha to karakura with little to no time transition, or distance. you don't explain how a ninja village could exist in such close proximity.
and lastly, the whole shinigami thing. no introduction to how it came to be, nothing, just him going off to fight hollows.
etc
too many holes in the story for me to continue.
6/14/2009 c8 1OverLordRevan
this story is awesome i hope beats the snot out of him...i also hopes he hooks up yoruichi
1OverLordRevanthis story is awesome i hope beats the snot out of him...i also hopes he hooks up yoruichi
6/14/2009 c8 3PudgySasquatch
...ME WANT MORE PLZ UPDATE SOON *hem* and if naruto lives is their going to be a paring.
3PudgySasquatch...ME WANT MORE PLZ UPDATE SOON *hem* and if naruto lives is their going to be a paring.
6/14/2009 c8 7I RuleThisWorldSoGetYourOwn
WHAT? You're having MINATO fight NARUTO? but... but, I 3 Minato! please don't let either die! Minato...
7I RuleThisWorldSoGetYourOwnWHAT? You're having MINATO fight NARUTO? but... but, I 3 Minato! please don't let either die! Minato...