
8/25/2004 c3 DemonessVampress
bleah ur story is alright but it's pretty generic and it hardely makes any sense...sorry for being a hardass, but i'm pretty opinionated and a critical bitch when it comez to art, literature, moviez, and creative writing...anyway ignore my review
PS: u should have gone for usagi/Zechs *just bcuz he's way hotter* like i said ignore me i'm a dumass
bleah ur story is alright but it's pretty generic and it hardely makes any sense...sorry for being a hardass, but i'm pretty opinionated and a critical bitch when it comez to art, literature, moviez, and creative writing...anyway ignore my review
PS: u should have gone for usagi/Zechs *just bcuz he's way hotter* like i said ignore me i'm a dumass
5/12/2002 c8 Angel Princess Serenity too lazy to click the sign in button
^^ lol loved it!
^^ lol loved it!
5/7/2002 c8
6silver-tiger11
Very discriptive in your last chapter with Usagi's outfit. I love that! Uh a little jumpy around with the timelines though. You know, the wedding and all. I can understand writers block however, you did a great job on this!

Very discriptive in your last chapter with Usagi's outfit. I love that! Uh a little jumpy around with the timelines though. You know, the wedding and all. I can understand writers block however, you did a great job on this!
4/30/2002 c8
6Miss Cellanie
Her water broke? That means she was pregnant and that means they had "made love" before getting married! Wellz, whatevaz! Good final chapter and I hope you liked my reviews! Ja Ne!

Her water broke? That means she was pregnant and that means they had "made love" before getting married! Wellz, whatevaz! Good final chapter and I hope you liked my reviews! Ja Ne!
4/30/2002 c7 Miss Cellanie
Need to write more reviews... Anyhoo, good description of the dresses and I liked how Relena was knocked unconscious and broke her nose and stuff! Great Job! Ja Ne!
Need to write more reviews... Anyhoo, good description of the dresses and I liked how Relena was knocked unconscious and broke her nose and stuff! Great Job! Ja Ne!
4/30/2002 c6 Miss Cellanie
KILL RELENA! KILL RELENA! YEAH! Good chapter and great imitation or the "banshee wail"! Ja Ne!
KILL RELENA! KILL RELENA! YEAH! Good chapter and great imitation or the "banshee wail"! Ja Ne!
4/30/2002 c5 Miss Cellanie
It's become Heero/Usagi-centered! Whoa, I never expected that! But good chapter! Got to read the next one! Ja Ne!
It's become Heero/Usagi-centered! Whoa, I never expected that! But good chapter! Got to read the next one! Ja Ne!
4/30/2002 c3 Miss Cellanie
HeHe.. Heyaz! I'm back already! I'm just reviewin so many times for fun! But anyhoo, great chapter! *and good job on the kiss!* Ja Ne!
HeHe.. Heyaz! I'm back already! I'm just reviewin so many times for fun! But anyhoo, great chapter! *and good job on the kiss!* Ja Ne!
4/30/2002 c2 Miss Cellanie
Dang, Usagi seemed OOC! But whatevas, I do that sometimes in my story too! Really good chapter! Ja Ne!
Dang, Usagi seemed OOC! But whatevas, I do that sometimes in my story too! Really good chapter! Ja Ne!
4/30/2002 c1 Miss Cellanie
Heyaz! I realy like the first chapter and how you made them all children! *kawaii!* ^.~ Anyhoo, g2 read the next chapter! Ja Ne!
Heyaz! I realy like the first chapter and how you made them all children! *kawaii!* ^.~ Anyhoo, g2 read the next chapter! Ja Ne!
4/30/2002 c8
3Saturnpyroprincess
So good I loved the ending so very creative definitly not what i ws thinking was the end but still good. make another story and maybe for this one you would make it longer and at a slower pace but i still love this story JA NE

So good I loved the ending so very creative definitly not what i ws thinking was the end but still good. make another story and maybe for this one you would make it longer and at a slower pace but i still love this story JA NE
4/30/2002 c8
6SarahSnape
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Poor Hiiro! lol :::falls on floor in fits of laughter::: I love this story!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Poor Hiiro! lol :::falls on floor in fits of laughter::: I love this story!