
9/23/2013 c1 BelleBiter
That was a hoot! So funny, and well-written... with real suspense. Perfect episode for a one-shot :)
That was a hoot! So funny, and well-written... with real suspense. Perfect episode for a one-shot :)
4/6/2013 c1 Novel's addict
the most amazing fan fiction i have ever read , i loved it , you are ana amazing writer :D
the most amazing fan fiction i have ever read , i loved it , you are ana amazing writer :D
11/10/2012 c1 ThatCurlygirl
your stories are so cute and sweet and they are all nicely written XD I love them:)
your stories are so cute and sweet and they are all nicely written XD I love them:)
4/15/2012 c1
5Seen in Shades of Gray
The entire time I was reading this I was listening to Somebody That I Used to Know, by Gotye, and it seemed to fit perfectly. Beautiful story.

The entire time I was reading this I was listening to Somebody That I Used to Know, by Gotye, and it seemed to fit perfectly. Beautiful story.
5/30/2011 c1 Akd1
Ahhh...brilliant, just like all the others you've written!
Ahhh...brilliant, just like all the others you've written!
1/3/2011 c1 onlybelieved
I really, really, really liked this.
loved is probably the better word.
urgh, one shots always leave me wanting more =/
Great story though 3
I really, really, really liked this.
loved is probably the better word.
urgh, one shots always leave me wanting more =/
Great story though 3
12/21/2010 c1 punz
Wow, I really enjoyed this story. I have been looking for something good to read for a LONG time in the Twilight fandom and I'm happy I came across this story. Just about everything out there now is sex and 90210 drama minus any real plot! It's getting old. Your story was a nice refresher and I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. I seriously believed they were going to die. Loved the ending alot.
Thanks for sharing,
Punz
Wow, I really enjoyed this story. I have been looking for something good to read for a LONG time in the Twilight fandom and I'm happy I came across this story. Just about everything out there now is sex and 90210 drama minus any real plot! It's getting old. Your story was a nice refresher and I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. I seriously believed they were going to die. Loved the ending alot.
Thanks for sharing,
Punz
11/10/2010 c1 Zhee
I'm almost sure that they will both die! Even though this is short, I can feel the adrenaline running in their blood during the intense moments.:)
I'm almost sure that they will both die! Even though this is short, I can feel the adrenaline running in their blood during the intense moments.:)