for The Last Minutes9/17/2010 c1 
7boggydrunks
Oh my, I really liked this story XD It's absolutely fantastic :) I like it when stories use profound (to me) words like "ignominiously", it brings the story to a higher level of class. Meanwhile it can also improve my vocabulary. Wouldn't mind it if you wrote more One-shots like this :)
Love the last part, "I'm here to unravel you, my knot." I personally think endings make all the difference. Which is why I like endings :D
Emmett's joke about Edward being adopted was funny too :)
P.S What's the joke? The one about dropping the key and breaking a nail. I was kinda stumped on that.
7boggydrunksOh my, I really liked this story XD It's absolutely fantastic :) I like it when stories use profound (to me) words like "ignominiously", it brings the story to a higher level of class. Meanwhile it can also improve my vocabulary. Wouldn't mind it if you wrote more One-shots like this :)
Love the last part, "I'm here to unravel you, my knot." I personally think endings make all the difference. Which is why I like endings :D
Emmett's joke about Edward being adopted was funny too :)
P.S What's the joke? The one about dropping the key and breaking a nail. I was kinda stumped on that.
7/27/2010 c1 orlibluver
I am actually kind of scared of what to put in here because your profile is so intimidating (in a good way though). I definitely agreed with everything that you said. If only more people realized it. My biggest pet peeve would have to be people not understanding the concept of spell check. Or just the simple grammar rules. But whatever, I guess I can deal with it.
Onto the real review and not a rant. I wasn't real sure what to expect from this story, if they were going to survive or not. And then I kept arguing with myself if he was still with his fiancee or not. I loved that in 7,807 words, you were able to suck me in so much. And who doesn't love an Agent Edward? I am very happy that it was able to make it to my favorite stories list (high expectations and all).
The only thing that confused me is the Burnett thing. I get that it is a philosophy thing, but I have never really been a philosophy kind of person. Could you please explain what this means to me? I know I'm being lazy but it is the summer before my freshman year of college begins so laziness is expected right now. :)
Thanks so much!
I am actually kind of scared of what to put in here because your profile is so intimidating (in a good way though). I definitely agreed with everything that you said. If only more people realized it. My biggest pet peeve would have to be people not understanding the concept of spell check. Or just the simple grammar rules. But whatever, I guess I can deal with it.
Onto the real review and not a rant. I wasn't real sure what to expect from this story, if they were going to survive or not. And then I kept arguing with myself if he was still with his fiancee or not. I loved that in 7,807 words, you were able to suck me in so much. And who doesn't love an Agent Edward? I am very happy that it was able to make it to my favorite stories list (high expectations and all).
The only thing that confused me is the Burnett thing. I get that it is a philosophy thing, but I have never really been a philosophy kind of person. Could you please explain what this means to me? I know I'm being lazy but it is the summer before my freshman year of college begins so laziness is expected right now. :)
Thanks so much!
10/28/2009 c1 1tsukemono-chan
Hey Anni,
Here I was re-reading this fabulous story when I discovered that I hadn't reviewed to it yet. D: I am appalled with myself. This is the darkest form of blasphemy. So now I must right this wrong. ;D
I really think this is story is spectacular! I'm immensely curious about the new situations Edward and Bella will find themselves in. Very curious indeed. Too bad it's only a one-shot. ):
Just you wait, Anni. I'm going to find a way for us to transfer brains sure that I get to have the magnificent-and-awesomely-creative mind and you get my boring-yet-very-good-at-memorizing-pointless-things mind. ;P
Bye byes,
Jordin
xoxox
1tsukemono-chanHey Anni,
Here I was re-reading this fabulous story when I discovered that I hadn't reviewed to it yet. D: I am appalled with myself. This is the darkest form of blasphemy. So now I must right this wrong. ;D
I really think this is story is spectacular! I'm immensely curious about the new situations Edward and Bella will find themselves in. Very curious indeed. Too bad it's only a one-shot. ):
Just you wait, Anni. I'm going to find a way for us to transfer brains sure that I get to have the magnificent-and-awesomely-creative mind and you get my boring-yet-very-good-at-memorizing-pointless-things mind. ;P
Bye byes,
Jordin
xoxox
10/14/2009 c1 1Nethead97
OMG that was AMAZING! I thought at the end of the countdown you were going to end it I was so wrapped up into reading it that I didn't even see how much was left on the scroll bar. I was so peeved! Then I kept reading LOL! Brillant absolutely brillant!
*hugs and cheek kisses*
~'Net
1Nethead97OMG that was AMAZING! I thought at the end of the countdown you were going to end it I was so wrapped up into reading it that I didn't even see how much was left on the scroll bar. I was so peeved! Then I kept reading LOL! Brillant absolutely brillant!
*hugs and cheek kisses*
~'Net
10/12/2009 c1 a lil ray of sunshinee
why in the world would we do that?
the idea that this could possibly turn into something more makes me giddy and estatic. xD
why in the world would we do that?
the idea that this could possibly turn into something more makes me giddy and estatic. xD
9/10/2009 c1 Whatever Is Catchy
I actually cried in this story... I thought that was how their lives were gonna end! I love it!
I actually cried in this story... I thought that was how their lives were gonna end! I love it!
9/8/2009 c1 2x TWILIGHT x OBSESSED x
i really liked this :) when edward didnt say 'i love you too' when she did (at first - just before the bomb 'went off') and u almost ended it there, i was like NOO! OMG NO WAY! but then you so kindly wrote more! and i am forever grateful ;)
i loved this one-shot. it was quite confusing, like i didnt understand their little joke (were we meant to?) but i think that it was written really well.
its really different from the other predictable stories and thats why i like it so much :D
well done :) x
2x TWILIGHT x OBSESSED xi really liked this :) when edward didnt say 'i love you too' when she did (at first - just before the bomb 'went off') and u almost ended it there, i was like NOO! OMG NO WAY! but then you so kindly wrote more! and i am forever grateful ;)
i loved this one-shot. it was quite confusing, like i didnt understand their little joke (were we meant to?) but i think that it was written really well.
its really different from the other predictable stories and thats why i like it so much :D
well done :) x
9/4/2009 c1 gaasadscu9
Woah, just brilliant. I've never seen any thing like this. I laughed at the bit when Carlisle gets punched. Glad to know they don't die and have a happy ending.
Woah, just brilliant. I've never seen any thing like this. I laughed at the bit when Carlisle gets punched. Glad to know they don't die and have a happy ending.
7/16/2009 c1 1GETRIDOFMYFREAKINGACCOUNTALREA
Okay I know I already reveiwed one of your stories, but that was great! You are a writer! Keep up the good work!
1GETRIDOFMYFREAKINGACCOUNTALREAOkay I know I already reveiwed one of your stories, but that was great! You are a writer! Keep up the good work!
7/3/2009 c1 Random
I love this story. Though it is a little confusing.
I love this story. Though it is a little confusing.
6/30/2009 c1 13Oxygen.and.Cucumber
That was adorable, and so well written when they thought they were going to die. I just can't believe he didn't say it back!
13Oxygen.and.CucumberThat was adorable, and so well written when they thought they were going to die. I just can't believe he didn't say it back!
6/27/2009 c1 M
*grins* so sweet, I'm glad you didn't stop there, this was great!
*grins* so sweet, I'm glad you didn't stop there, this was great!