for The Last Minutes6/18/2009 c1 Bitter Sea Light
Amazing! :D See oli tõsiselt hea jutt... Ma siiamaani ei saa aru, kuidas su aju suudab midagi NII lahedat välja mõelda, aga ma olen nii õnnelik, et ta saab sellega hakkama. :) Mul oligi juts selline halb tuju, aga nüüd on kõik jälle korras... :) Aitäh sulle! :D
Palju päikest, inspiratsiooni ja puhkust sulle! :)
PS. Kui sul midagi selle vastu pole, tahaksin sulle augustis külla tulla. :)
Amazing! :D See oli tõsiselt hea jutt... Ma siiamaani ei saa aru, kuidas su aju suudab midagi NII lahedat välja mõelda, aga ma olen nii õnnelik, et ta saab sellega hakkama. :) Mul oligi juts selline halb tuju, aga nüüd on kõik jälle korras... :) Aitäh sulle! :D
Palju päikest, inspiratsiooni ja puhkust sulle! :)
PS. Kui sul midagi selle vastu pole, tahaksin sulle augustis külla tulla. :)
6/16/2009 c1 Cassiopeia7
Congradulations! you are you officially my favorite writer of all times (yes that includes Stephanie Mayer, Moriarty, E. Grayman, and maybe just MAYBEE Agatha Christie!). I love how your story "unwraps" and then BOOM! there's this huge twist and etc and you got my stomach filled with butterflies (or whatever that feeling is called now?). The ending was absolutely perfect! Anyways, I'm getting speechless (i'm smiling too much now...). xDD
Congradulations! you are you officially my favorite writer of all times (yes that includes Stephanie Mayer, Moriarty, E. Grayman, and maybe just MAYBEE Agatha Christie!). I love how your story "unwraps" and then BOOM! there's this huge twist and etc and you got my stomach filled with butterflies (or whatever that feeling is called now?). The ending was absolutely perfect! Anyways, I'm getting speechless (i'm smiling too much now...). xDD
6/14/2009 c1 
3DakotaCatherine
Aww! Thanks so much, Mav! 3
I really loved it! My favorite part was definately the part that you were going to make the end. So intense!
While it would've been so awesome for you to end it there, so perfect for you to end it there, I think you're right; pretty much all twilight fanfic readers would want your head, including myself... rofl.
BUT i did really like the afterward part... very unexpected. Haha and that was SO Emmett to burst in on their special moment. Hilarious :D
Loved it, love you! You're great!
~Dakota
3DakotaCatherineAww! Thanks so much, Mav! 3
I really loved it! My favorite part was definately the part that you were going to make the end. So intense!
While it would've been so awesome for you to end it there, so perfect for you to end it there, I think you're right; pretty much all twilight fanfic readers would want your head, including myself... rofl.
BUT i did really like the afterward part... very unexpected. Haha and that was SO Emmett to burst in on their special moment. Hilarious :D
Loved it, love you! You're great!
~Dakota
6/14/2009 c1 SabrinaEden
Wow. Wow. Amazing. I loved it, adored it! This is fantastic! Written thoroughly and it had me on the edge of my chair! The playlists works brilliantly along with it, I love it :D
Your writing style is phenominal! Please write more soon x
Wow. Wow. Amazing. I loved it, adored it! This is fantastic! Written thoroughly and it had me on the edge of my chair! The playlists works brilliantly along with it, I love it :D
Your writing style is phenominal! Please write more soon x
6/14/2009 c1 Anna
Yes, I would have been very upset if you left the story off there in the middle. Great ending! Very emotional! I kept thinking, "Aw, that's cute!" I liked how it wasn't cheesy when they admitted their love... Anyway, great job!
~Anna
Yes, I would have been very upset if you left the story off there in the middle. Great ending! Very emotional! I kept thinking, "Aw, that's cute!" I liked how it wasn't cheesy when they admitted their love... Anyway, great job!
~Anna
6/14/2009 c1 9twilightsun01
No, smartie, I would shoot you cause it is! I sure wish this were a full length story...I also wish I were more creative and thought of something like this for MY story about Edward and Bella being spies...secret agents...whatever. Awesome read! :D
9twilightsun01No, smartie, I would shoot you cause it is! I sure wish this were a full length story...I also wish I were more creative and thought of something like this for MY story about Edward and Bella being spies...secret agents...whatever. Awesome read! :D