
5/26/2022 c1 Guest
Way to make Bella look spineless. Why could she not fight her battles. I know she likes being week and having Edward save her all the time
Way to make Bella look spineless. Why could she not fight her battles. I know she likes being week and having Edward save her all the time
3/14/2019 c1 Guest
Horrible grammar- this needs editing
Horrible grammar- this needs editing
12/9/2017 c1 Guest
love it
love it
1/11/2016 c1 Gabae
Cute! Soooooo cute I loved it
Cute! Soooooo cute I loved it
8/2/2014 c1 lilly
love it you are a great writer and please continue to write more amazing stories
love it you are a great writer and please continue to write more amazing stories
1/25/2014 c1
1Keeylaaahni
Omg.. omg.. i totally laughed when i red this. I totally thought that edward DID just love bella because of the way her blood smelled and because he couldnt read her mind. Haha im weird. I like the story tho. * round of applause*

Omg.. omg.. i totally laughed when i red this. I totally thought that edward DID just love bella because of the way her blood smelled and because he couldnt read her mind. Haha im weird. I like the story tho. * round of applause*
8/6/2011 c1 Dear Mary-Sue
It's a good story, but you need to check over for
mistakes, sinse some of the sentences don't make sense.
It's a good story, but you need to check over for
mistakes, sinse some of the sentences don't make sense.
5/22/2011 c1 Lexis
Love the story I wish it was longer and had more of that love and hate thing with Tanya and Bella. Overall loved it!
Love the story I wish it was longer and had more of that love and hate thing with Tanya and Bella. Overall loved it!
5/8/2011 c1
18I Know I'm A Dreamer
Uh-oh
*shaking*
*scared and sad*
Uh-oh
*pissed off* Die tanya! *advancing with flamethrower*
I like this Irina
DIE TANYA!

Uh-oh
*shaking*
*scared and sad*
Uh-oh
*pissed off* Die tanya! *advancing with flamethrower*
I like this Irina
DIE TANYA!
8/7/2009 c1
9Karly Black
Tanya thought that 1st week that he came back for...HER? Wow. I DO feel a little bad for her though!
What...NO! Edward...he didn't! But...maybe. Did Tanya...KISS him? Did he KISS HER? I wonder what happened... All I think I know is that they probably kissed...
WHAT? Tanya...*laughs*...and Edward*laughs* belonmg 5together? *bursts into gigles* YEAH RIGHT!
Why is Bella sad/ He didn't betray her! Tanya kissed HIM!
Oh no... Tanya? Well, what can Tanya do to Bella? They both have the same amount of strength! If Bella's a newborn Bella's STRONGER than Tanya! WHat could she- UGH! SHe could lie! She could lie to Bella! Why?
UGH! I guess Tanya COULD beat Bella in a fight!
YAY! EDIE!
Sorry Tanya! NOT!
BELLA feels bad for TANYA? WOW! lol
AW! That's sweet!
GREAT JOB!

Tanya thought that 1st week that he came back for...HER? Wow. I DO feel a little bad for her though!
What...NO! Edward...he didn't! But...maybe. Did Tanya...KISS him? Did he KISS HER? I wonder what happened... All I think I know is that they probably kissed...
WHAT? Tanya...*laughs*...and Edward*laughs* belonmg 5together? *bursts into gigles* YEAH RIGHT!
Why is Bella sad/ He didn't betray her! Tanya kissed HIM!
Oh no... Tanya? Well, what can Tanya do to Bella? They both have the same amount of strength! If Bella's a newborn Bella's STRONGER than Tanya! WHat could she- UGH! SHe could lie! She could lie to Bella! Why?
UGH! I guess Tanya COULD beat Bella in a fight!
YAY! EDIE!
Sorry Tanya! NOT!
BELLA feels bad for TANYA? WOW! lol
AW! That's sweet!
GREAT JOB!
6/20/2009 c1 twilightlover1099
i loved it! u should write another story about tanya! please tell me if there is a sequel!
i loved it! u should write another story about tanya! please tell me if there is a sequel!