for Catalysis6/26/2009 c2 
54rokosourobouros
*gasp* wow...Ed's mum hates him? NOES...This is a really, really, really...(continues on to infinity), REALLY awesome story!
Can't wait for the next chapter ^^ and nice alchemy jargon XD
54rokosourobouros*gasp* wow...Ed's mum hates him? NOES...This is a really, really, really...(continues on to infinity), REALLY awesome story!
Can't wait for the next chapter ^^ and nice alchemy jargon XD
6/26/2009 c2 11Monksea
oH! That was a sad chapter but very good! Im addicted... I NEED MORE CHAPTERS! Please? :3
11MonkseaoH! That was a sad chapter but very good! Im addicted... I NEED MORE CHAPTERS! Please? :3
6/26/2009 c2 19Twisted Vixen
Aw, I felt so sad at the end when Ed decided to leave. I love the way the story is going so far. It's very realistic. I can't wait to see what happens in Central.
19Twisted VixenAw, I felt so sad at the end when Ed decided to leave. I love the way the story is going so far. It's very realistic. I can't wait to see what happens in Central.
6/26/2009 c2 16Lovelessloveableme
Amazing chapter loved it. ur a really goof writer :) cant wait 4 more!
*~ashley~*
16LovelessloveablemeAmazing chapter loved it. ur a really goof writer :) cant wait 4 more!
*~ashley~*
6/26/2009 c2 2Luna-Lunak
This is SO EXCITING! I hope you will update soon, and that we will get super exciting Central chapter and then some fast forward so we could see Ed older, more famous and ready for some romance. xD
2Luna-LunakThis is SO EXCITING! I hope you will update soon, and that we will get super exciting Central chapter and then some fast forward so we could see Ed older, more famous and ready for some romance. xD
6/18/2009 c1 16Lovelessloveableme
i like it done really well and cant wait 2 see what happends next
*~ashley~*
16Lovelessloveablemei like it done really well and cant wait 2 see what happends next
*~ashley~*
6/16/2009 c1 19Twisted Vixen
Wow, I love the idea. I haven't seen this kind of story yet. And I swear, I just about felt the painful process of getting automail. And I love the way you have Ed connecting with Roy (in their own typical way of course).
I can't wait to see how the story progresses from here.
19Twisted VixenWow, I love the idea. I haven't seen this kind of story yet. And I swear, I just about felt the painful process of getting automail. And I love the way you have Ed connecting with Roy (in their own typical way of course).
I can't wait to see how the story progresses from here.
6/16/2009 c1 5Nanashi-Angel
Very nice. Well written, and original. I don't think I've ever seen a plot anything like this one. I can't wait to read more. I am interested in seeing Al and Trisha's reactions to... well, everything!
5Nanashi-AngelVery nice. Well written, and original. I don't think I've ever seen a plot anything like this one. I can't wait to read more. I am interested in seeing Al and Trisha's reactions to... well, everything!
6/16/2009 c1 25Deranged Black Kitten
Wow. Just wow. This whole story is fantastic and I can't wait to see where you go with it. Ed's point of view was very well done and the whole story progresses smoothly. I'm interested to see if Ed will accept the state alchemy position and what sort of role Trisha will play in the story now that she's alive again. Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next update!
25Deranged Black KittenWow. Just wow. This whole story is fantastic and I can't wait to see where you go with it. Ed's point of view was very well done and the whole story progresses smoothly. I'm interested to see if Ed will accept the state alchemy position and what sort of role Trisha will play in the story now that she's alive again. Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next update!
6/16/2009 c1 5The Faerie of Darkness
... *drool*
Do you understand the massive epicness of what you are doing? I'm hooked! What's Ed going to be like without the drive to fix himself and Al? And Mustang's going to stay in the picture... Like as a dad? Or something more?
Your writing is absoloutely amazing. I love the italicized thoughts and the fact that Ed still wants his automail. He's just not the same if he's not the man of steel... I am totally looking forward to more of this! Amazing!
~ The Faerie of Darkness
5The Faerie of Darkness... *drool*
Do you understand the massive epicness of what you are doing? I'm hooked! What's Ed going to be like without the drive to fix himself and Al? And Mustang's going to stay in the picture... Like as a dad? Or something more?
Your writing is absoloutely amazing. I love the italicized thoughts and the fact that Ed still wants his automail. He's just not the same if he's not the man of steel... I am totally looking forward to more of this! Amazing!
~ The Faerie of Darkness