for Down The Rabbit Hole: Love Hina Arc11/15/2009 c7 
1Kapola Nuva
Lol, this is great. keep it up! cant wait for the cursed to be shown. bet it will be today! err. no today today, but the stories today.. you know what i mean. dont you? you do right? Why arent you answering me? T-T
Anyways im tracking this now and cant wait for more! dont let this story die! EVER!
Anyways keep writing this story i enjoy it!
1Kapola NuvaLol, this is great. keep it up! cant wait for the cursed to be shown. bet it will be today! err. no today today, but the stories today.. you know what i mean. dont you? you do right? Why arent you answering me? T-T
Anyways im tracking this now and cant wait for more! dont let this story die! EVER!
Anyways keep writing this story i enjoy it!
10/29/2009 c7 5Eden's pseudonym
This seems to be one of the more interesting Ranma/Love Hina crosses out there. The character interaction is quite amusing, between Ranma and the others. It'll be interesting to see how everyone reacts to Ranma living with them.
In a way, it's good that there's no set pairing at the moment, since Naru and Motoko are likely worse than Akane at the moment, without the previous good first meeting, Mitsune seems like the type he'd have trouble dealing with and with his aging up to 19, the others seem too young. It leaves it open for drama, character development from that or Kanako, Mutsumi or someone else coming in later. If nothing else, knowing that he has an adopted sister (in an unknown location at this time) and that there were two girls, should change a lot.
5Eden's pseudonymThis seems to be one of the more interesting Ranma/Love Hina crosses out there. The character interaction is quite amusing, between Ranma and the others. It'll be interesting to see how everyone reacts to Ranma living with them.
In a way, it's good that there's no set pairing at the moment, since Naru and Motoko are likely worse than Akane at the moment, without the previous good first meeting, Mitsune seems like the type he'd have trouble dealing with and with his aging up to 19, the others seem too young. It leaves it open for drama, character development from that or Kanako, Mutsumi or someone else coming in later. If nothing else, knowing that he has an adopted sister (in an unknown location at this time) and that there were two girls, should change a lot.
10/20/2009 c7 FateBurn
it was a good chapter altough realy short but its good to know that your working in Vicissitude as for the pairings I would like Ranma with Motoko and I would like to take this oportunity and insist in maintaining the Ranma/Britanny pairing in Vicissitude and don`t make it a harem but if you`ll like to compromice with the people that want a harem the add only one more girl in this case I would like Brianna. And finaly hope you find the way to make the next chapter work and update soon coz I cant wait to see how Nodoka reacts to what has happened, see ya!
it was a good chapter altough realy short but its good to know that your working in Vicissitude as for the pairings I would like Ranma with Motoko and I would like to take this oportunity and insist in maintaining the Ranma/Britanny pairing in Vicissitude and don`t make it a harem but if you`ll like to compromice with the people that want a harem the add only one more girl in this case I would like Brianna. And finaly hope you find the way to make the next chapter work and update soon coz I cant wait to see how Nodoka reacts to what has happened, see ya!
10/19/2009 c7 phoenix.ru
*Sigh* after such a long wait such a short chapter.
Still, better than nothing ^_^
Hope you find time and inspiration to carry on!
*Sigh* after such a long wait such a short chapter.
Still, better than nothing ^_^
Hope you find time and inspiration to carry on!
10/19/2009 c7 8Quathis
Short but funny, liked how he got a legitimate reason to cry pervert on them. This keeps looking better and better. Until next time.
8QuathisShort but funny, liked how he got a legitimate reason to cry pervert on them. This keeps looking better and better. Until next time.
10/19/2009 c7 10Wonderbee31
Nice little moment there, and liked how the girls got caught there, and going to really look forward to what all Granny has done, as well as how Ranma keeps working on his own problems in this new life.
10Wonderbee31Nice little moment there, and liked how the girls got caught there, and going to really look forward to what all Granny has done, as well as how Ranma keeps working on his own problems in this new life.
10/19/2009 c7 18Dreamingfox
Well, it's good to see you updating something at least. Keep it up.
I know how it is with writing multiple fics and updating them all. It's a tall order. Good luck.
18DreamingfoxWell, it's good to see you updating something at least. Keep it up.
I know how it is with writing multiple fics and updating them all. It's a tall order. Good luck.
10/11/2009 c6 9Burning Frost
Definitely one of the best Ranma/Love Hina crossovers I've seen, and I'm quite impressed with the effort. Great characterization and a good following to the original stories. Not many things I see that need correction and I have no suggestions whatsoever that could possibly make this story better so I say keep writing.
By the way, if I had to choose a pairing it would be Ranma/Kanako. Why? Because no one would see it coming, and it would be a challenge (to me at least) to write.
9Burning FrostDefinitely one of the best Ranma/Love Hina crossovers I've seen, and I'm quite impressed with the effort. Great characterization and a good following to the original stories. Not many things I see that need correction and I have no suggestions whatsoever that could possibly make this story better so I say keep writing.
By the way, if I had to choose a pairing it would be Ranma/Kanako. Why? Because no one would see it coming, and it would be a challenge (to me at least) to write.
10/1/2009 c6 Darren Alston
Hahahaha...all right. Not bad. I like how you play Ranma's aggravating mannerisms against Naru and Motoko's extremely short fuse. That should provide all sorts of material in and of itself. Not quite sure about the relationship between Haruka and Ranma though. Doesn't feel quite right. Flow was okay and premise is decent enough for fan fiction standards. Keep it up.
Hahahaha...all right. Not bad. I like how you play Ranma's aggravating mannerisms against Naru and Motoko's extremely short fuse. That should provide all sorts of material in and of itself. Not quite sure about the relationship between Haruka and Ranma though. Doesn't feel quite right. Flow was okay and premise is decent enough for fan fiction standards. Keep it up.