for Down The Rabbit Hole: Love Hina Arc7/14/2009 c5 ashnjack
Good work. I really enjoyed this chapter.I must say, this is one of the better written storys I have read. Proper grammer and spelling, while not as important as the story/plot, truly make the read enjoyable. I was also wondering if you could tell me which anime/manga the arcs take place in, if not how many arcs you are planning on doing? Looking forward to new chapters.
Good work. I really enjoyed this chapter.I must say, this is one of the better written storys I have read. Proper grammer and spelling, while not as important as the story/plot, truly make the read enjoyable. I was also wondering if you could tell me which anime/manga the arcs take place in, if not how many arcs you are planning on doing? Looking forward to new chapters.
7/14/2009 c5 
1Edrik
Finally another chapter!
I hope the introductions will be done by next chapter like you predict. Not that I have anything against having the characters of the story getting orientated with one another, but I think it is prolonging the story. I like the idea that Motoko will be rivals with Ranma regardless of his gender, though knowing her she would piece the curse together faster than everyone (well maybe not Mitsune) so the rivalry will either increase or die down. Ranma seems to be sharper than what I remember from the series, but I guess that comes with age.
Good job once again and hope to see another chapter soon!
1EdrikFinally another chapter!
I hope the introductions will be done by next chapter like you predict. Not that I have anything against having the characters of the story getting orientated with one another, but I think it is prolonging the story. I like the idea that Motoko will be rivals with Ranma regardless of his gender, though knowing her she would piece the curse together faster than everyone (well maybe not Mitsune) so the rivalry will either increase or die down. Ranma seems to be sharper than what I remember from the series, but I guess that comes with age.
Good job once again and hope to see another chapter soon!
6/30/2009 c4 CopyZero
Great story, I like your idea. Very original. Anyways I hope that you keep up the good work.
Great story, I like your idea. Very original. Anyways I hope that you keep up the good work.
6/30/2009 c4 phoenix.ru
Mwahaha! I can see where this one is going. Quite a nice set up and lots of possibilities to develop the story ^_^ Pls update!
Mwahaha! I can see where this one is going. Quite a nice set up and lots of possibilities to develop the story ^_^ Pls update!
6/29/2009 c4 18Dreamingfox
Nice fic. A bit too short/brief for my personal tastes, but it's fairly well written.
I would suggest that you use something like the standard itailics = thoughts rather than going with thoughts written out between apostrophies (sp?).
Might also help to get a beta reader to check it over as well.
Still, interesting take on a crossover fic that for some reason there isn't much love for.
18DreamingfoxNice fic. A bit too short/brief for my personal tastes, but it's fairly well written.
I would suggest that you use something like the standard itailics = thoughts rather than going with thoughts written out between apostrophies (sp?).
Might also help to get a beta reader to check it over as well.
Still, interesting take on a crossover fic that for some reason there isn't much love for.
6/27/2009 c4 3Hiryo
That was again a very good story and damn am I anxious about how this plot with continue to spin its tale!
Plaese update soon!
3HiryoThat was again a very good story and damn am I anxious about how this plot with continue to spin its tale!
Plaese update soon!
6/27/2009 c4 1Edrik
Kinda seems like you rushed this chapter. It is a tad bit shorter than the previous ones. Many typos as well, but at least it is updated frequently.
Thank you for yet another chapter! ^^
1EdrikKinda seems like you rushed this chapter. It is a tad bit shorter than the previous ones. Many typos as well, but at least it is updated frequently.
Thank you for yet another chapter! ^^
6/26/2009 c4 8Dumbledork
Hehehe. Excellent. I see a lot of pain for Ranma in the future. Mixing his bad people skills with Keitaro's bad luck, and taking theit mutual propensity of getting into compromising situation into account... well, it won't be pretty.
8DumbledorkHehehe. Excellent. I see a lot of pain for Ranma in the future. Mixing his bad people skills with Keitaro's bad luck, and taking theit mutual propensity of getting into compromising situation into account... well, it won't be pretty.
6/26/2009 c4 Windrave
Very nice chapter, though I admit I'dve liked to go on just a bit longer to at least show what Haruka was going to tell them before the next chapter.
For Haruka's sake, I would hope that she won't voice her thoughts on Anything Goes being crap compared to the Urashima style, as there's a reason why Ranma's as adaptable as he is. Something that he'd probably be all too happy to show if she does voice it.
Very much looking forward to seeing how this all plays out.
Very nice chapter, though I admit I'dve liked to go on just a bit longer to at least show what Haruka was going to tell them before the next chapter.
For Haruka's sake, I would hope that she won't voice her thoughts on Anything Goes being crap compared to the Urashima style, as there's a reason why Ranma's as adaptable as he is. Something that he'd probably be all too happy to show if she does voice it.
Very much looking forward to seeing how this all plays out.