for Down The Rabbit Hole: Love Hina Arc12/25/2011 c11 iota0000
Wow, I thought this fic was long dead. Really glad to see that's not the case.
Wow, I thought this fic was long dead. Really glad to see that's not the case.
12/25/2011 c11 
3Bloodreaver Alpha
Well, it's about bloody time. Been waiting on this thing for ages...
Short, but good.
3Bloodreaver AlphaWell, it's about bloody time. Been waiting on this thing for ages...
Short, but good.
11/17/2011 c10 Riverlia
I don't see why Ranma would let Naru hit him all the time like that.
Even if the power of his physical body was reduced, with his chi-reserve and senses up to post-wedding level, an amateur like her has zero chance to tag Ranma.
The soon-to-be-Ronin's not even in Akane's league, and Ranma only let Akane hit him because he favored her canonically, or because he was paralyzed/swarmed by others.
There is nothing here indicating any level of attraction toward Naru, hell, he had more interaction with Motoko and Kitsune.
While Ranma won't launch her into orbit, he should be able to dodge or block all her attempts rather easily if he found it as annoying as he said.
Hope this won't become another bashing fest.
Sure it fun to read a fic that bash a character I won't like (in this case, Naru), going overboard make it a bit hard to enjoy.
I don't see why Ranma would let Naru hit him all the time like that.
Even if the power of his physical body was reduced, with his chi-reserve and senses up to post-wedding level, an amateur like her has zero chance to tag Ranma.
The soon-to-be-Ronin's not even in Akane's league, and Ranma only let Akane hit him because he favored her canonically, or because he was paralyzed/swarmed by others.
There is nothing here indicating any level of attraction toward Naru, hell, he had more interaction with Motoko and Kitsune.
While Ranma won't launch her into orbit, he should be able to dodge or block all her attempts rather easily if he found it as annoying as he said.
Hope this won't become another bashing fest.
Sure it fun to read a fic that bash a character I won't like (in this case, Naru), going overboard make it a bit hard to enjoy.
8/18/2011 c10 5Orchamus
Damn pity the ratings so low, while I don't care about a sex scene, light limes are nice, and this story doesn't seem to be getting updated, damn shame, not enough of this crossover out there.
5OrchamusDamn pity the ratings so low, while I don't care about a sex scene, light limes are nice, and this story doesn't seem to be getting updated, damn shame, not enough of this crossover out there.
6/21/2011 c10 4Negima Uzumaki
Please tell me that you will get Ranma back up to his Fighting Level that he was at before he got sent into the Love Hina world.
4Negima UzumakiPlease tell me that you will get Ranma back up to his Fighting Level that he was at before he got sent into the Love Hina world.
4/21/2011 c10 1Raynze76
this was my first R/LH crossover story and it was a pleasure to read, bummed its not been updated in a while as was looking forward to see what happens
1Raynze76this was my first R/LH crossover story and it was a pleasure to read, bummed its not been updated in a while as was looking forward to see what happens
9/23/2010 c10 3Gelionlegends
Well nice story and so but...
Well all i see is ranma taking keitaro place and getting the s**t kicked out of him and doing nothing to stop them like blocking or redirecting their attacks.
If ranma is supposed to be intelligent and such why hasn't he done something to the situation, heck we haven't even seen him do any studying for the exams.
I do hope things pick up for ranma with his situation, and getting his own back on naru and mokoto.
Heck what about training in martial arts and such he was going to do.
Just hope he gets out of the mess he is in as he has two people kicking his ass and sending him flying instead of one, in fact it doesn't look like he has changed his situation much.
3GelionlegendsWell nice story and so but...
Well all i see is ranma taking keitaro place and getting the s**t kicked out of him and doing nothing to stop them like blocking or redirecting their attacks.
If ranma is supposed to be intelligent and such why hasn't he done something to the situation, heck we haven't even seen him do any studying for the exams.
I do hope things pick up for ranma with his situation, and getting his own back on naru and mokoto.
Heck what about training in martial arts and such he was going to do.
Just hope he gets out of the mess he is in as he has two people kicking his ass and sending him flying instead of one, in fact it doesn't look like he has changed his situation much.
9/18/2010 c2 ttripled
Pretty good so far. The only thing I found that might have been inconsistent is him being a genius as mentioned at the Nekoken training but winds up failing the exam twice after he's thrown himself into his studies. Guess you can chalk it up to being mentally unstable after picking up the curse. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
Pretty good so far. The only thing I found that might have been inconsistent is him being a genius as mentioned at the Nekoken training but winds up failing the exam twice after he's thrown himself into his studies. Guess you can chalk it up to being mentally unstable after picking up the curse. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
7/5/2010 c10 1AnFan-n-More
Nice story so far. I'm enjoying it. I hope you will continue in like vein. Though I would ask for longer chapters. Even more so now that I'll be reading the updates one chapter at a time. That's my vote anyway :)
Thanks for writing.
1AnFan-n-MoreNice story so far. I'm enjoying it. I hope you will continue in like vein. Though I would ask for longer chapters. Even more so now that I'll be reading the updates one chapter at a time. That's my vote anyway :)
Thanks for writing.