for Mutant Angel7/11/2010 c8 
32FoxInBox aka FIB
Please write more soon! This is very good, and the sad truth is *sob* im afraid I may be addicted to it!
32FoxInBox aka FIBPlease write more soon! This is very good, and the sad truth is *sob* im afraid I may be addicted to it!
5/6/2010 c8 5Bookits
I think that they should have let Dai-chan's mom have at the X-Men. This is an awesomemost story EVER! Please update ASAP! Or I'll send Krad at you!
5BookitsI think that they should have let Dai-chan's mom have at the X-Men. This is an awesomemost story EVER! Please update ASAP! Or I'll send Krad at you!
3/8/2010 c8 9LilyQuix
Are you going to write another chapter? Cause if you are that would be awesome!
9LilyQuixAre you going to write another chapter? Cause if you are that would be awesome!
2/5/2010 c5 3In.Light.Syrup
here are some tips/suggestions:
the characters seem a bit OOC (out of character) please fix that!
story seems random, too rushed. try to slow down the pace or broaden the chapters. a.k.a, add more details please.
I see a lot of typos and grammar mistakes :0 I suggest a spell checker, and for you to double-check your work.
other than that, the story seems fine. the idea of it seems interesting :)
3In.Light.Syruphere are some tips/suggestions:
the characters seem a bit OOC (out of character) please fix that!
story seems random, too rushed. try to slow down the pace or broaden the chapters. a.k.a, add more details please.
I see a lot of typos and grammar mistakes :0 I suggest a spell checker, and for you to double-check your work.
other than that, the story seems fine. the idea of it seems interesting :)
12/22/2009 c8 3TanyaUchiha
OMG what an awesome chapter! I love Emiko she is awesome and you described her perfectly.
3TanyaUchihaOMG what an awesome chapter! I love Emiko she is awesome and you described her perfectly.
12/22/2009 c8 3deathnoteno1fan-codegeasslover
The X-Men are really starting to piss me off thinking that they knew about every fu*King thing.(I've been reading other cross-overs so its not just based on this fic)Dark and Krad talking to the X-Men was AWSOME!I LOVE! Emiko!Fave line and scene is the following...“Oh? These? They are a machine gun and a missile launcher Kosuke-san. I got these today for a trap I set up for Dai-chan,” chirped Emiko happily.""
LOL!NO.1
“E-E-E-Emiko-san,” stammered Kosuke sweat-dropping.
“Why me?” wondered Daisuke out loud with a dark cloud over his head and having anime tears streaming down his face.
LOL!NO.1Scene
Can't wait till the next chapter!
UP-DATE!REAL!SOON!
3deathnoteno1fan-codegeassloverThe X-Men are really starting to piss me off thinking that they knew about every fu*King thing.(I've been reading other cross-overs so its not just based on this fic)Dark and Krad talking to the X-Men was AWSOME!I LOVE! Emiko!Fave line and scene is the following...“Oh? These? They are a machine gun and a missile launcher Kosuke-san. I got these today for a trap I set up for Dai-chan,” chirped Emiko happily.""
LOL!NO.1
“E-E-E-Emiko-san,” stammered Kosuke sweat-dropping.
“Why me?” wondered Daisuke out loud with a dark cloud over his head and having anime tears streaming down his face.
LOL!NO.1Scene
Can't wait till the next chapter!
UP-DATE!REAL!SOON!