for Mutant Angel7/19/2009 c5 
4Fox Alder
yay, you put up a new chapter! also, you are totally awesome for having emiko put in the traps, she would do that, you should have some of the X-men come upon some, that would be hilarious! update soon!
4Fox Alderyay, you put up a new chapter! also, you are totally awesome for having emiko put in the traps, she would do that, you should have some of the X-men come upon some, that would be hilarious! update soon!
7/19/2009 c5 1D.Magic
this story sound cool so update soon cause i can't wait to find out what happens next!
1D.Magicthis story sound cool so update soon cause i can't wait to find out what happens next!
7/9/2009 c4 Wraith Queen 500
i am so exited, i can't wait to see what happended. I would like to make on sugjestion take out stuff like "This young man was the Phantom Thief Dark", and "His name is Daisuke Niwa..." and use dialog to tell who they are like how you put "“GR, CURSE YOU DARK,” shouted police inspector Saehara". It will imporve your story.
i am so exited, i can't wait to see what happended. I would like to make on sugjestion take out stuff like "This young man was the Phantom Thief Dark", and "His name is Daisuke Niwa..." and use dialog to tell who they are like how you put "“GR, CURSE YOU DARK,” shouted police inspector Saehara". It will imporve your story.