
7/15/2020 c1 Key-Idea
Man, that reminds me of when my toes froze while I was skiing. That burning sensation is no joke. Great story! I appreciate that you took the time to make sure your fic was medically accurate.
Man, that reminds me of when my toes froze while I was skiing. That burning sensation is no joke. Great story! I appreciate that you took the time to make sure your fic was medically accurate.
2/6/2020 c1
22Melwa Rat
This is definitely in my list of my all time favorite fan fictions. I’ve probably reread it a thousand times, not to mention that it inspired me to take up fanfic writing as well! 10/10! :)

This is definitely in my list of my all time favorite fan fictions. I’ve probably reread it a thousand times, not to mention that it inspired me to take up fanfic writing as well! 10/10! :)
12/31/2017 c1 Guest
Super good loved it so much!
Super good loved it so much!
11/1/2017 c1 noneofyourbuisne
You had a lot of spelling errors and you need to rethink your Anakin and Ahsoka being caught together and to make things more interesting you could try to make it look like Ahsoka will not make it and her leg injury? It would not have healed that fast. I tink this is what you were looking for. Also I think that the Ion cannon was after the clone wars.
You had a lot of spelling errors and you need to rethink your Anakin and Ahsoka being caught together and to make things more interesting you could try to make it look like Ahsoka will not make it and her leg injury? It would not have healed that fast. I tink this is what you were looking for. Also I think that the Ion cannon was after the clone wars.
4/26/2017 c1 Guest
You just made a masterpiece. Please continue ? : ))
You just made a masterpiece. Please continue ? : ))
11/20/2016 c1 Guest
I liked this. Made me laugh. Obiwan always does w his remarks. Right on character. I'm glad this wasn't just a sappy romance.
I liked this. Made me laugh. Obiwan always does w his remarks. Right on character. I'm glad this wasn't just a sappy romance.
7/1/2016 c1 Virginia
That was so cool! I loved it. I have 3 younger sisters and we all LOVE the Clone Wars. Well, until Ahsoka leaves. I've just been trying to read a ton of stories about her because we've watched all the episodes with her in them until we have memorized every word.
That was so cool! I loved it. I have 3 younger sisters and we all LOVE the Clone Wars. Well, until Ahsoka leaves. I've just been trying to read a ton of stories about her because we've watched all the episodes with her in them until we have memorized every word.
4/16/2016 c1 Guest
I hope you make another chapter to this, I really really really like your story. YOU LEFT A CLIFFHANGER ENDING AND IM DYING TO KNOW WHAT ELSE HAPPENS...
I hope you make another chapter to this, I really really really like your story. YOU LEFT A CLIFFHANGER ENDING AND IM DYING TO KNOW WHAT ELSE HAPPENS...
4/16/2016 c1 Ciara
I hope you make another chapter to this, I really really really love your work.
I hope you make another chapter to this, I really really really love your work.
11/3/2015 c1 elvenlord
*waves my hand in front of your face* you want to make a story of this an a sequel.
*waves my hand in front of your face* you want to make a story of this an a sequel.
7/12/2015 c1 coolcreate
particularly enjoyable.
particularly enjoyable.