9/18/2012 c8 T3CHN0 C4T
Okay, so I have found minor grammar mistakes, but I have to say that this is great and it's a shame not many have read it.
Even though it hasn't been updated in forever, I'll still be checking back every now and then for the next chapter :3
-Techno Cat
(lol for some reason im now like, addicted to AkuZeku Zemyx where axel is a total bitch and abuses zexion or whatevers and then demyx comes in and zexy falls in lurve with him)
Okay, so I have found minor grammar mistakes, but I have to say that this is great and it's a shame not many have read it.
Even though it hasn't been updated in forever, I'll still be checking back every now and then for the next chapter :3
-Techno Cat
(lol for some reason im now like, addicted to AkuZeku Zemyx where axel is a total bitch and abuses zexion or whatevers and then demyx comes in and zexy falls in lurve with him)
1/24/2010 c8 7kailiff
Hey, guess what? I finally read this chapter. 8'D
This filled me with lulz.
CRISS-CROSS-APPLE-SAUCE OMG I remember that from Kindergarden. x'D Yes3
Not much else to say. Good chapter, though. WRITE THE NEXT ONE.
Hey, guess what? I finally read this chapter. 8'D
This filled me with lulz.
CRISS-CROSS-APPLE-SAUCE OMG I remember that from Kindergarden. x'D Yes3
Not much else to say. Good chapter, though. WRITE THE NEXT ONE.
12/1/2009 c8 2PencilsLovePaper
What is there to not like? Honestly, my friend, you've already managed to include WoW, Brownies, Batman, Zemyx, Axel being a jerk, Baltheir, and cookies, for gods sake! It's does not get any better than that!
(Unless you add the cake is a lie, of course XD)
What is there to not like? Honestly, my friend, you've already managed to include WoW, Brownies, Batman, Zemyx, Axel being a jerk, Baltheir, and cookies, for gods sake! It's does not get any better than that!
(Unless you add the cake is a lie, of course XD)
10/9/2009 c7 PencilsLovePaper
They make online translators, silly! Anyway, I have a spanish book, and my nerdy internet skills, along with the best fucking librarian ever, and I really want the next chapter, so if you haven't found someone to do it, I'd be glad to help!
They make online translators, silly! Anyway, I have a spanish book, and my nerdy internet skills, along with the best fucking librarian ever, and I really want the next chapter, so if you haven't found someone to do it, I'd be glad to help!
9/25/2009 c8 1Akarui Siren
I like you
No wait I don't like you!
I mean I like you not that I don't like you!
Oh wait it's I don't like you but I still like you but by means I don't like you!
AH... Whatever~!
I just don't hate you! xP
I like you
No wait I don't like you!
I mean I like you not that I don't like you!
Oh wait it's I don't like you but I still like you but by means I don't like you!
AH... Whatever~!
I just don't hate you! xP
9/25/2009 c8 23animearlinefreak
Aww this is such a cute chapter and I can't wait to see the next one!
Aww this is such a cute chapter and I can't wait to see the next one!
9/25/2009 c8 Symphonicality
I don't get nosebleeds. They don't make any sense.
I like how Demyx stole Zexion away, but I didn't like how you didn't go all like 'MEANWHILE AXEL WAS LIKE 'HOLY FUCK WHERE'S THE BABY'.
v.v
I don't get nosebleeds. They don't make any sense.
I like how Demyx stole Zexion away, but I didn't like how you didn't go all like 'MEANWHILE AXEL WAS LIKE 'HOLY FUCK WHERE'S THE BABY'.
v.v
9/24/2009 c8 Finnegan G. Drake
Por qué no español? Eh, cualquier, yo no cuido.
Anyways, I loved this chapter! 'Twas funny! Funny indeed! Never would have occurred to me to think of Axel as mexicano. Good touch.
Por qué no español? Eh, cualquier, yo no cuido.
Anyways, I loved this chapter! 'Twas funny! Funny indeed! Never would have occurred to me to think of Axel as mexicano. Good touch.