for Closer2/20 c45 Updateplease
Why?! Why is the beauty still incomplete? I really wish someday you would come and update entwined and heirs mate.
Why?! Why is the beauty still incomplete? I really wish someday you would come and update entwined and heirs mate.
6/9/2022 c1 genedvt
this story is so good and far from over yet it's tagged as complete. Do you have sequel to this.
this story is so good and far from over yet it's tagged as complete. Do you have sequel to this.
11/20/2021 c44 yo
if he hypnotized her and took out her iud in order to get her pregnant that’s stealthing a form of rape…
if he hypnotized her and took out her iud in order to get her pregnant that’s stealthing a form of rape…
8/14/2020 c1 
1nourmakky
I got to say. This is one of the best fanfic I’ve ever read on this site. I’ve always wanted Ino to be with Shikamaru. So I wasn’t expecting this pairing to be good. You’ve totally blown my mind. This fanfic is perfection(The minor errors are forgivable and I don’t really mind). I hope you update the sequel, no matter how long it’ll take. Once again, you’re amazing and I hope you have a wonderful day. I’ll take my time and read this fanfic once more. Thank you for writing this.
1nourmakkyI got to say. This is one of the best fanfic I’ve ever read on this site. I’ve always wanted Ino to be with Shikamaru. So I wasn’t expecting this pairing to be good. You’ve totally blown my mind. This fanfic is perfection(The minor errors are forgivable and I don’t really mind). I hope you update the sequel, no matter how long it’ll take. Once again, you’re amazing and I hope you have a wonderful day. I’ll take my time and read this fanfic once more. Thank you for writing this.
4/8/2019 c45 KurosakiRukia81
Okay, my roomie was rereading this fic for the nth time and hounded me into reading it as well. And now I owe her some baskin and robin 'cause I absouletly loved your work! It's so good! Hope you update the sequel tho and did I mention that I am absolutely hooked with Sasuino.
Okay, my roomie was rereading this fic for the nth time and hounded me into reading it as well. And now I owe her some baskin and robin 'cause I absouletly loved your work! It's so good! Hope you update the sequel tho and did I mention that I am absolutely hooked with Sasuino.
3/27/2019 c45 Ai
I need to spill it out so I can get out of here and stop wishing that Kishimoto took the sasuino relationship dynamics from this story. I love how you've potrayed Sasuke,Ino,Naruto and Sakura. They are so on point and the relationship between Sasuke and Ino is an absolute delight to read. Their budding friendship was my favourite part along with Naruto and Ino's bond(It made me melt into a gooey mess). Anko's crazy and Kakashi's a perverted gentlemen to a 'T',and that's why I adore them *squeals*. Tho Sasuke is an idiot for that 'get her knocked plan' but I really do belive he is a jackass enough to do that. And my perfect Itachi (Ah~ I am totally his fangirl). The story's awesome and your sasuino reunion it hawt. It's not only one of the best/if not best sasuino stories on net and if you ever update you'll be making a lot of people very happy. Kudos for your awesome work!
I need to spill it out so I can get out of here and stop wishing that Kishimoto took the sasuino relationship dynamics from this story. I love how you've potrayed Sasuke,Ino,Naruto and Sakura. They are so on point and the relationship between Sasuke and Ino is an absolute delight to read. Their budding friendship was my favourite part along with Naruto and Ino's bond(It made me melt into a gooey mess). Anko's crazy and Kakashi's a perverted gentlemen to a 'T',and that's why I adore them *squeals*. Tho Sasuke is an idiot for that 'get her knocked plan' but I really do belive he is a jackass enough to do that. And my perfect Itachi (Ah~ I am totally his fangirl). The story's awesome and your sasuino reunion it hawt. It's not only one of the best/if not best sasuino stories on net and if you ever update you'll be making a lot of people very happy. Kudos for your awesome work!
10/20/2018 c1 Guest
Update?
Update?
9/6/2018 c45 SeiryuuSuzaku
And so it ends. The most interesting plot twist/element was introduced here, what in the world is Kabuto planning to do with an Ino clone and how much mayhem will it cause. I can just imagine the original and the clone meeting in a one on one death match on the battlefield in the 4th Shinobi World War. That'd be fun to read.
And so it ends. The most interesting plot twist/element was introduced here, what in the world is Kabuto planning to do with an Ino clone and how much mayhem will it cause. I can just imagine the original and the clone meeting in a one on one death match on the battlefield in the 4th Shinobi World War. That'd be fun to read.
9/6/2018 c44 SeiryuuSuzaku
Interesting means of keeping Ino out of the battles to come on Sasuke's part. I hope Ino smacks him real hard for this. All kinds of F'd up no matter how much he wants to protect her.
Interesting means of keeping Ino out of the battles to come on Sasuke's part. I hope Ino smacks him real hard for this. All kinds of F'd up no matter how much he wants to protect her.
9/6/2018 c43 SeiryuuSuzaku
Coming right down to the wire, two chapters left. I'm so sad now. No way it has a proper conclusion in two chapters.
Coming right down to the wire, two chapters left. I'm so sad now. No way it has a proper conclusion in two chapters.
9/5/2018 c42 SeiryuuSuzaku
Well the hurt is about to get laid upon someone, or multiple someones. This next chapter should be really good.
Well the hurt is about to get laid upon someone, or multiple someones. This next chapter should be really good.
9/5/2018 c41 SeiryuuSuzaku
I would advise archiving this on AO3 (Archive of Our Own) rather than the adult version of this site since AO3 is more popular, but to each their own.
To be fair I think you stuck within the site guidelines and rules outside of the fact you keep putting little snippets of lyrics at the start of each chapter since around chapter 35 or so which is not within the guidelines and rules for the site for the obvious reasons of copyright/plagiarism troubles on their end for users ignoring this rule, but I guess you were one of the lucky ones who had his/her story slip through the cracks when they were doing their periodic purge.
I don't really know why you included the lyrics snippets though, they add nothing to the story and just put you at unnecessary risk of having the story removed. I know it ticks a lot of users off that the site has been hammering down on actually enforcing their guidelines and rules in recent years, but they're well within their rights and in this case it's a small thing that would go a long way.
The M rated content you've included is actually perfectly within their M rating specifics. Not overly descriptive or graphic. Not bordering or crossing into MA territory which they don't allow so you're good on that front. Just remove the lyrics and your story'd be safe.
I would advise archiving this on AO3 (Archive of Our Own) rather than the adult version of this site since AO3 is more popular, but to each their own.
To be fair I think you stuck within the site guidelines and rules outside of the fact you keep putting little snippets of lyrics at the start of each chapter since around chapter 35 or so which is not within the guidelines and rules for the site for the obvious reasons of copyright/plagiarism troubles on their end for users ignoring this rule, but I guess you were one of the lucky ones who had his/her story slip through the cracks when they were doing their periodic purge.
I don't really know why you included the lyrics snippets though, they add nothing to the story and just put you at unnecessary risk of having the story removed. I know it ticks a lot of users off that the site has been hammering down on actually enforcing their guidelines and rules in recent years, but they're well within their rights and in this case it's a small thing that would go a long way.
The M rated content you've included is actually perfectly within their M rating specifics. Not overly descriptive or graphic. Not bordering or crossing into MA territory which they don't allow so you're good on that front. Just remove the lyrics and your story'd be safe.
9/4/2018 c39 SeiryuuSuzaku
Nice bombshell drop there Reiko, oh I can just imagine Sasuke's reaction to that one. This is gonna be good!
Nice bombshell drop there Reiko, oh I can just imagine Sasuke's reaction to that one. This is gonna be good!
9/4/2018 c35 SeiryuuSuzaku
Oh, hi Pein.
Oh, hi Pein.