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1jenejes
Thank you for writing this story. I enjoyed it. My only comment about it would be the Queen's English. It would have been better if you just set it in England, because the anachronisms are too much. They kept pulling me out of the story. Other than that, even with the slow timeline, it still felt like it moved, and I liked that quite a bit.
1jenejesThank you for writing this story. I enjoyed it. My only comment about it would be the Queen's English. It would have been better if you just set it in England, because the anachronisms are too much. They kept pulling me out of the story. Other than that, even with the slow timeline, it still felt like it moved, and I liked that quite a bit.
10/18/2023 c69 Liane1208
this was such a cute and wonderful story. i couldnt put it down. thank you so much for such an enjoyable (and original! so hard to do!) story. <3
this was such a cute and wonderful story. i couldnt put it down. thank you so much for such an enjoyable (and original! so hard to do!) story. <3
8/15/2023 c69 twilightobession
I like the twist with Jane. I am a little sad that we didn't get anytime with Edward, Bella and the baby. I would have loved to see Edward's reaction. Also, what did Esme think of them naming him after her Ethan? Thank you for sharing with us. I really enjoyed it.
I like the twist with Jane. I am a little sad that we didn't get anytime with Edward, Bella and the baby. I would have loved to see Edward's reaction. Also, what did Esme think of them naming him after her Ethan? Thank you for sharing with us. I really enjoyed it.
8/14/2023 c66 twilightobession
I am glad they are back together. I can't believe Bella is not staying home from school I know I would.
I am glad they are back together. I can't believe Bella is not staying home from school I know I would.
8/14/2023 c65 twilightobession
I hope things get straightened out with Edward and school. How did Edward find Bella?
I hope things get straightened out with Edward and school. How did Edward find Bella?
8/14/2023 c64 twilightobession
Thanks for giving us Mason's POV. He is the only thinking and making sense.
Thanks for giving us Mason's POV. He is the only thinking and making sense.
8/14/2023 c63 twilightobession
Bella is a mess. I'm glad that Mason is not taking advantage of her state of mind.
Bella is a mess. I'm glad that Mason is not taking advantage of her state of mind.
8/14/2023 c61 twilightobession
Even if Bella did try to call Edward, she wouldn't get him. His phone is broke. What does Alice have planned? Is Alice pregnant too?
Even if Bella did try to call Edward, she wouldn't get him. His phone is broke. What does Alice have planned? Is Alice pregnant too?
8/13/2023 c58 twilightobession
I was hoping Alice and Bella would at least talked some. I feel so bad for Edward and for Bella.
I was hoping Alice and Bella would at least talked some. I feel so bad for Edward and for Bella.