
2/1 c2
5Donovan Master 55
Bueno te sere sincero, es un fic con bastante problemas de gramatica y en su desarrollo. Pero mentiria si dijera que cuando menos no logra ser interesante y entretenido de leer. Algo que ya de por su es mucho mejor que los fics de Dragon Ball que suelen hacerse, por lo menos aqui esto no se trata de hacer ver a Goku como la ultima Coca del desierto. Sin embargo siento que faltaron mas participación del resto del Darkstalkers, y se me hizo raro no ver a Donovan en la pelea contra Raditz siendo que el ya habia peleado con un Alien devorador de mundos XD (Aunque quizas por eso no lo incluiste, pudo haber sido demasiado para Raditz). Aun asi me perece un fic bastante decente en terminos de creatividad (aunque algunas escena se sintieron algo raras), yo te daria cuando menos un 7/10.
Una lastima que parece que ya no continuaras este fic.

Bueno te sere sincero, es un fic con bastante problemas de gramatica y en su desarrollo. Pero mentiria si dijera que cuando menos no logra ser interesante y entretenido de leer. Algo que ya de por su es mucho mejor que los fics de Dragon Ball que suelen hacerse, por lo menos aqui esto no se trata de hacer ver a Goku como la ultima Coca del desierto. Sin embargo siento que faltaron mas participación del resto del Darkstalkers, y se me hizo raro no ver a Donovan en la pelea contra Raditz siendo que el ya habia peleado con un Alien devorador de mundos XD (Aunque quizas por eso no lo incluiste, pudo haber sido demasiado para Raditz). Aun asi me perece un fic bastante decente en terminos de creatividad (aunque algunas escena se sintieron algo raras), yo te daria cuando menos un 7/10.
Una lastima que parece que ya no continuaras este fic.
2/8/2015 c2
2pensuka
i wonder what will happen next does gohan unlock super sayian right at start of the android saga bit?

i wonder what will happen next does gohan unlock super sayian right at start of the android saga bit?
1/21/2013 c2 James
Where's Felicia in this story
Where's Felicia in this story
8/7/2011 c2 Insane One
Simple: an EPIC story, one of the best I ever saw, so please continue, and remember that u can only revive twice with the dragonballs, so be careful!
Simple: an EPIC story, one of the best I ever saw, so please continue, and remember that u can only revive twice with the dragonballs, so be careful!
7/21/2010 c1 Majin Phoenix
Nice start. I like it. It's good to find a good DBZ/darkstalkers cross. Good work
Nice start. I like it. It's good to find a good DBZ/darkstalkers cross. Good work
1/25/2010 c2
17Gamer165
That was a cool chapter please have Jon and Goku come back to life and I would like to see Felica try to Nappa so please update.

That was a cool chapter please have Jon and Goku come back to life and I would like to see Felica try to Nappa so please update.
1/18/2010 c2
2Duralzero
Hey Knight just read both chapters; reading the 1st over again. Again, I say the whole concept was interesting and I can see where you're going with it. I've noticed that the dialog sometimes have no pauses between them and it makes them sound like they're speaking paragraphs in one breath. There are still some grammatical things that didn't make sense to me and a few spelling errors. I also scratched my head at Anita, the 5 yr old somehow knowing the "rules" of DBZ, but I'll just shrug that one off.
anyways, good story and I'll be looking for more installments.

Hey Knight just read both chapters; reading the 1st over again. Again, I say the whole concept was interesting and I can see where you're going with it. I've noticed that the dialog sometimes have no pauses between them and it makes them sound like they're speaking paragraphs in one breath. There are still some grammatical things that didn't make sense to me and a few spelling errors. I also scratched my head at Anita, the 5 yr old somehow knowing the "rules" of DBZ, but I'll just shrug that one off.
anyways, good story and I'll be looking for more installments.
1/15/2010 c2
2DBZROCKS10
Great chapter and nice change of scenes in the battle, but it felt like this chapter was rushed. It's always good to take time in chapters to make it better. Anyways, update soon.

Great chapter and nice change of scenes in the battle, but it felt like this chapter was rushed. It's always good to take time in chapters to make it better. Anyways, update soon.
12/16/2009 c1
17Gamer165
It has a pretty good plot but some stuff did confuse me like how does Anita know about KI cause I was thinking that Jon would know a thing about KI sense in a way he's a martial arts master plus the idea of Jon and Goku sparring that would be cool so update please.

It has a pretty good plot but some stuff did confuse me like how does Anita know about KI cause I was thinking that Jon would know a thing about KI sense in a way he's a martial arts master plus the idea of Jon and Goku sparring that would be cool so update please.
8/30/2009 c1
24TURP
question 1. how soon can you continue this? question 2 will the Darkstalkers fight alongside Goku against Raditz? 3rd question would you read and review my stories entitled "The Diclonious and the Maverick Hunter chaps 1 and 2" and "Elvin Lied's Nightwarriors" which are both made by Capcom. Can ya do that for me? To get in touch w/me email at if you mail i'll get back to you after a couple days. bye.

question 1. how soon can you continue this? question 2 will the Darkstalkers fight alongside Goku against Raditz? 3rd question would you read and review my stories entitled "The Diclonious and the Maverick Hunter chaps 1 and 2" and "Elvin Lied's Nightwarriors" which are both made by Capcom. Can ya do that for me? To get in touch w/me email at if you mail i'll get back to you after a couple days. bye.
8/6/2009 c1 vampire saiyan gokin
I like the chapter 1 whin are you going to start chapter two i can't wait what happen next?
Are you going put the darkstalkers cat girl felicia and the dbz saiyan warrior goku togeter as a brother and sister bond or just best friends?
if you want to send a return message my e-mail address is
I like the chapter 1 whin are you going to start chapter two i can't wait what happen next?
Are you going put the darkstalkers cat girl felicia and the dbz saiyan warrior goku togeter as a brother and sister bond or just best friends?
if you want to send a return message my e-mail address is
7/4/2009 c1
2Duralzero
Interesting concept. I really wonder where the inspiration for this came from. Very few grammatical errors here and there. Overall, this is a pretty good story and I hope you continue it.

Interesting concept. I really wonder where the inspiration for this came from. Very few grammatical errors here and there. Overall, this is a pretty good story and I hope you continue it.
6/27/2009 c1
2DBZROCKS10
Great story I should say. Very interesting. I wonder how would the Darkstalkers would impact the world of DragonBall Z?
Excellent chapter. ^^

Great story I should say. Very interesting. I wonder how would the Darkstalkers would impact the world of DragonBall Z?
Excellent chapter. ^^