for Elitist Theory9/16/2009 c4 camillian
so far so good :) i really liked this chapter where heero and relena's interaction was actually very realistic and subtly dramatic. quite refreshing. please update when you can :)
so far so good :) i really liked this chapter where heero and relena's interaction was actually very realistic and subtly dramatic. quite refreshing. please update when you can :)
7/27/2009 c1 
21fan-to-fiction
This is a real nice story. But one thing I find confusing. In the naime Heero has blue eyes, not chocolate-colored. Did you meant to say that he had chocolate-colored hair or blue eyes?
Anyway keep going, it's good.
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21fan-to-fictionThis is a real nice story. But one thing I find confusing. In the naime Heero has blue eyes, not chocolate-colored. Did you meant to say that he had chocolate-colored hair or blue eyes?
Anyway keep going, it's good.
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7/24/2009 c2 lildeamon666
Awesome! Awesome! Loved it. and the length was just fine. and who cares about a bit of occ niss. not when this story is as awsome as it is a little does no harm. love'n the story! its great! Happy Writing!
Awesome! Awesome! Loved it. and the length was just fine. and who cares about a bit of occ niss. not when this story is as awsome as it is a little does no harm. love'n the story! its great! Happy Writing!
6/27/2009 c1 heather
I really liked the way this story is written! i can't wait to find out what happens next
I really liked the way this story is written! i can't wait to find out what happens next
6/25/2009 c1 Ama-chan
Reading this, I was irritated by the shortness of the chapter. At first. Upon completing this prologue, I actually found myself liking the style you used. I eagerly anticipate your next chapter and amd extremely happy that it will be longer (while I ended up enjoying the length of this chapter, I do typically like long chapters more). I hope to see your update soon. If you ever need a Beta, let me know. :)
jamiefarrell@knights. = my email.
~*Ama-chan
Reading this, I was irritated by the shortness of the chapter. At first. Upon completing this prologue, I actually found myself liking the style you used. I eagerly anticipate your next chapter and amd extremely happy that it will be longer (while I ended up enjoying the length of this chapter, I do typically like long chapters more). I hope to see your update soon. If you ever need a Beta, let me know. :)
jamiefarrell@knights. = my email.
~*Ama-chan