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7/17/2009 c2
17Asher Knight
I loved it! Awesome chapter.
Caleb and Rachel are so cute
together. Great job. I've been
waiting for an update. Update
soon please.
xoxo
Kris Knight
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I loved it! Awesome chapter.
Caleb and Rachel are so cute
together. Great job. I've been
waiting for an update. Update
soon please.
xoxo
Kris Knight
7/3/2009 c3
3AngelOfTheSouthWest
Oh oh! She's in trouble. Can't wait to see how Caleb reacts. Aww, Caleb as a daddy, that's got to be cute :) This is good, keep going.
Steff x
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Oh oh! She's in trouble. Can't wait to see how Caleb reacts. Aww, Caleb as a daddy, that's got to be cute :) This is good, keep going.
Steff x
7/2/2009 c1
17Asher Knight
Oh. My. Damn. I
loved it. It was so
cute. You seriously
need to consider making
this a long piece. You've
got my hooked already.
Great Job. Can't wait
for you to update.
xoxo
Kris
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Oh. My. Damn. I
loved it. It was so
cute. You seriously
need to consider making
this a long piece. You've
got my hooked already.
Great Job. Can't wait
for you to update.
xoxo
Kris
6/29/2009 c2
2Rei.Rein
Haha, you didn't have to continue writing the story if you didn't want to.
It's just real interesting.
I'm flattered, thank you.
Rachiee-Rae
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Haha, you didn't have to continue writing the story if you didn't want to.
It's just real interesting.
I'm flattered, thank you.
Rachiee-Rae
6/25/2009 c1 Rei.Rein
aw that's so sweet! haha you used my name whether or not it was on purpose I don't know but I still feel loved :D
and you spelt it right too!
I like seeing a different sort of Caleb too, not too serious and not too different.
And you're writing again!
I'm happy that you are again.
Rachiee-Rae
aw that's so sweet! haha you used my name whether or not it was on purpose I don't know but I still feel loved :D
and you spelt it right too!
I like seeing a different sort of Caleb too, not too serious and not too different.
And you're writing again!
I'm happy that you are again.
Rachiee-Rae
6/25/2009 c1
3AngelOfTheSouthWest
Aw, this is cute. Would like to see more of your character and this relationship.
Steff x
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Aw, this is cute. Would like to see more of your character and this relationship.
Steff x