9/7/2009 c4 2chocolatemud
i love your story..
i'm curious about what happen next with Mori and Suzume.. also with Honey and other hosts..
please update soon..
i love your story..
i'm curious about what happen next with Mori and Suzume.. also with Honey and other hosts..
please update soon..
9/6/2009 c4 Swann Shooter
That last line was perfect! The rest is all very well written, of course, but that line... There are only a few stories that have chapters that end so brilliantly, the last one that was that epic was a FMA fic. The last line was about spider-man. X3
That last line was perfect! The rest is all very well written, of course, but that line... There are only a few stories that have chapters that end so brilliantly, the last one that was that epic was a FMA fic. The last line was about spider-man. X3
9/6/2009 c1 5minuit-profondeur
Truly remarkable story you've got alot of talent. cant wait for next chapter :]
Truly remarkable story you've got alot of talent. cant wait for next chapter :]
7/5/2009 c3 Absmar
O.K. You got me in this story, I'm in love with your story. Hook, line, and sinker- I guess- would be the best way to describe it.
You've drawn me in with these three chapters, I simply have high hopes for more updates in the (very) near future.
(: Zanyx
O.K. You got me in this story, I'm in love with your story. Hook, line, and sinker- I guess- would be the best way to describe it.
You've drawn me in with these three chapters, I simply have high hopes for more updates in the (very) near future.
(: Zanyx
7/1/2009 c1 1StarlightWish17
O. I like it so far. =] The beginning was really good! I just love how you wrote: 'It was though she was a ghost, gliding above the floor, the shadows her only comfort.' That was such an awesome description. ^_^ Anyway, I'll keep checking up on your fic. Keep writing it~! I want to know what happens. :D
O. I like it so far. =] The beginning was really good! I just love how you wrote: 'It was though she was a ghost, gliding above the floor, the shadows her only comfort.' That was such an awesome description. ^_^ Anyway, I'll keep checking up on your fic. Keep writing it~! I want to know what happens. :D
6/26/2009 c1 1AngelsFireNIce
what's the word i'm looking for...impactful...? stunning..? striking..?
well, until i think of it, very good job, i look foward to updates! =)
what's the word i'm looking for...impactful...? stunning..? striking..?
well, until i think of it, very good job, i look foward to updates! =)