for Misadventure of Insanity2/26/2010 c1 YO IT'S AMU
this story deserves another chapter. this story could GO PLACES! lol... not like that sick-o!
this story deserves another chapter. this story could GO PLACES! lol... not like that sick-o!
1/25/2010 c1 
3Sandstripe
LOL ending was the best part, it was very funny seeing the interaction between Ikuto and Amu from a different perspective, good job keeping every one in charecter! One small note : "Nadehiko" is his girl form where as "Nagihiko" is his boy form
3SandstripeLOL ending was the best part, it was very funny seeing the interaction between Ikuto and Amu from a different perspective, good job keeping every one in charecter! One small note : "Nadehiko" is his girl form where as "Nagihiko" is his boy form
12/30/2009 c1 125Tuliharja
Oh, I just loved this! Hiro was just so...Hiro. xD Lol!
It was just so lovely see things in Hiro's eyes and when Ikuto came...lol! Yes, Ikuto was just cosplayer and they had ended into a freak land. Lol! xD
125TuliharjaOh, I just loved this! Hiro was just so...Hiro. xD Lol!
It was just so lovely see things in Hiro's eyes and when Ikuto came...lol! Yes, Ikuto was just cosplayer and they had ended into a freak land. Lol! xD
12/27/2009 c1 31Angelic Sakura Blossom - Moved
You NAILED Hiro! I love his choice of words at the end!
31Angelic Sakura Blossom - MovedYou NAILED Hiro! I love his choice of words at the end!
10/1/2009 c1 17Ignisha
not bad, not bad. oh and you got the transformation statement wrong. its chara-NARI, not chara-nii... anyways, great job!
17Ignishanot bad, not bad. oh and you got the transformation statement wrong. its chara-NARI, not chara-nii... anyways, great job!
6/30/2009 c1 jasonvaldez
oh yea...Kisa was older than him...whoops xD Hiro Kisa~3
Hiro is super amazing! Thank you so much, and even though you said the plot wasn't good I think it was clever. I would have NEVER thought about something like that XD (and I don't mean that in a bad way) Great job!
oh yea...Kisa was older than him...whoops xD Hiro Kisa~3
Hiro is super amazing! Thank you so much, and even though you said the plot wasn't good I think it was clever. I would have NEVER thought about something like that XD (and I don't mean that in a bad way) Great job!
6/29/2009 c1 3huskychao
There are so many good things here that I can't say them all within a short time.
3huskychaoThere are so many good things here that I can't say them all within a short time.
6/27/2009 c1 5NarutoFallenAngel123
Please continue this story cuz its really good! Um... thats it! Thanks for wrting a great story!
5NarutoFallenAngel123Please continue this story cuz its really good! Um... thats it! Thanks for wrting a great story!
6/26/2009 c1 1Sexymidnightneko
What a fascinating story! Wording, grammer, you could really picture the story taking place before you! That's two thumbs up for you! Excellent, keep up the good work! However, with how the story ended, this needs a second chapter. It feels like it needs just more than a one-shot. *bows* Please accept this review for this amazing story!
p.s.- It's Nagihiko, not Nadehiko XP
1SexymidnightnekoWhat a fascinating story! Wording, grammer, you could really picture the story taking place before you! That's two thumbs up for you! Excellent, keep up the good work! However, with how the story ended, this needs a second chapter. It feels like it needs just more than a one-shot. *bows* Please accept this review for this amazing story!
p.s.- It's Nagihiko, not Nadehiko XP