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7/24/2009 c4 Katsumara
Great chapter with Freya here. I'm not sure on the color here, but I'm thinking.. green?
7/20/2009 c3 16Myshu
Ha, SO white. Scarcely had to think about it.

Weddings squick the hell out of me, but this was too well-played to pass up. Beatrix ALWAYS wins, gwahaha. She's such a fox (in more ways than one.) Watching Steiner sweat was even better, and I love his graceful "surrender."

Another fun fic bite!
7/20/2009 c3 4914karatgold
White. You are good at this. =] Though I read them a while back, I didn't review for the first two (apologies). Regardless, I'm fairly certain they were yellow and red respectively. I love the use of imaginative hints to create the feeling of a color theme. It's a wonderful idea! So creative and I'm enjoying it immensely. Of course, I enjoy all of your work, so I suppose that last statement goes without saying. =]

Keep it up!

kt
7/20/2009 c3 Katsumara
Haha. Great chapter, and hey! Some Zidane/Dagger action, even if it's 'off-screen' and some Steiner/Beatrix. I don't know what it is about those two, but I enjoy them as a couple.
7/20/2009 c3 15ganetto rain
I love Beatrix and Steiner! They were Steiner and Beatrix to the very dot - Steiner's nerves and Beatrix's slyness (which I thought was very Beatrix! Even though, yes, it doesn't show up that much in the game.)

Especially loved this scene:

“Lord Zidane,” she corrects (to irk him).

“Y-yes. Lord Zidane. He likes all the theatrics. He wanted a parade through the streets Alexandria – can you believe it? The nerve of that rapscallion! As if five ceremonies and being flaunted before hundreds of onlookers and some of the most respectable individuals in the world is not enough! Why sometimes I ought to just –“

“Would I wear a dress, I wonder?”

-giggles-

Great fic! :D -thumbs up- And yes, I really adore Blank/Ruby as well (although I am a conventional ZidDag fangirl. XD)
7/6/2009 c2 DaggerAran13
x3 I also like BlankxRuby~ Dunno why. I just do :3

Very cute story. Lemme guess the color. Is it red? D:

(is a bad guesser) I await the next chapter ^^
7/6/2009 c2 1Thrills and Frills
Hey!

Never been a huge Blank/Ruby fan, but I liked this, I thought it was different. The Vivi/Eiko chapter was pure cuteness and a little sad. Nicely done, update soon!
7/3/2009 c2 Katsumara
Oh, awesome chapter. I do love me some Blank and Ruby. As far as the color goes.. would I be correct in guessing red, maybe?
7/3/2009 c2 14Caitlyn-4479
Your favourite couple ISN'T Ziddag? :O Well, I can't blame you for loving Blank x Ruby ^^

Ha, he's too hard to resist, eh Ruby? :P Cute lil fic :D

Red lipstick, Red blood, Red's the colour of angry... I'm gonna say red. AND red's the colour of love, cause there was lovin' in the end ;D But if I'm wrong I'll be terribly embarrassed -_-

Can't wait for the next chappie! ^^
7/2/2009 c1 DaggerAran13
This was a cute little oneshot ^^ I like Eiko and Vivi~ They're so adorable.

The very last sentence was is so true x3 Precious things remain with us always.

Color for this one: yellow :3

Can't wait for future parts :D
6/28/2009 c1 17DragonGirl323
This was really really cute! :] I loved it! And I'm guessing that the color for this one is yellow. I could be wrong though...

Can't wait to see more from you! :D

Sincerely,

DragonGirl323
6/28/2009 c1 16Myshu
You know what threw me off for a bit? All the buttercups I've ever seen (especially the ones that grew around my old house) were pink. I had to stop and think about it before googling up some buttercups-and voila, they're yellow. I am bemused.

Anyway this is utterly charming, with a dash of bittersweet. I like how Vivi always manages to be offhandedly wise and thoughtful for his small age. And Eiko's attitude always makes things spicy and fun.

Ah, sometimes the little things in life are the best-like this ficlet! I'll be looking forward to more.
6/28/2009 c1 14Caitlyn-4479
Aw, that last line was so sad ;( It was such a nice chappie tho. And I'm glad to see more stories from you! :D I'm guessing this chappie is yellow, but the last line isn't really happy... but overall I'll say yellow ^^ I love Eiko and Vivi's friendship, especially in this ^_^

Can't wait for the next chappie! :)
6/27/2009 c1 Katsumara
Great chapter, and you fooled me. =[ Here I was thinking it was a totally happy-go-lucky chapter, until I read the last sentence.

Either way, a well written chapter and I can't wait to read on. Hoping for some Zidane/GarnetDagger action. Also, my guess for the color of this chapter is maybe.. yellow? Chocobo + the sun + the buttercup flowers (which are yellow)? Just a guess.
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