for Spot Conlon: 1882 to 2009?10/17/2010 c6 
11xXEmiShaeXx
Oh. My. God. Wow. Just, like...Wow. I totally forgot about that. Diary? Delia really? Why? You don't keep a diary! I laughed throughout this whole chapter; this is better than rereading Newsies Again!And...LAZULI AND JASMINE! ARE YOU GOING TO KEEP THEM IN THERE? AND ODO? WHY? I feel like crying now. -anime tears-
~ XOXO Dani ^^
11xXEmiShaeXxOh. My. God. Wow. Just, like...Wow. I totally forgot about that. Diary? Delia really? Why? You don't keep a diary! I laughed throughout this whole chapter; this is better than rereading Newsies Again!And...LAZULI AND JASMINE! ARE YOU GOING TO KEEP THEM IN THERE? AND ODO? WHY? I feel like crying now. -anime tears-
~ XOXO Dani ^^
12/4/2009 c14 2Spotty's Goil
Dude! Ur writing it again? AWW! Can't u write it over after u finish? :-(
2Spotty's GoilDude! Ur writing it again? AWW! Can't u write it over after u finish? :-(
12/4/2009 c14 3InsideMyRainbowEyes
I loved the last couple of chapters and I can't wait till the next!
3InsideMyRainbowEyesI loved the last couple of chapters and I can't wait till the next!
11/29/2009 c1 TheLampKnowsAll
Mary sue?...MARY SUE? that has got to be the greatest pun i've heard in a few days!
Mary sue?...MARY SUE? that has got to be the greatest pun i've heard in a few days!
10/10/2009 c4 2Spotty's Goil
OMG! If you are Delia in this story you and me are like really alike! I love Spot, people think I'm mental, (although I have all A's) I have goldenish hair like you described, and I don't match my clothes! Love the story so far!
2Spotty's GoilOMG! If you are Delia in this story you and me are like really alike! I love Spot, people think I'm mental, (although I have all A's) I have goldenish hair like you described, and I don't match my clothes! Love the story so far!
9/10/2009 c12 4Izabeal Finley
I really like how this is going! And where I think it's going! lol
Update soon!
-Hail's!
4Izabeal FinleyI really like how this is going! And where I think it's going! lol
Update soon!
-Hail's!
9/9/2009 c12 59Hedgi
spot at a dance? oh, dear me... i'm reviewing! :)
and i know how sucky school is... ick.
59Hedgispot at a dance? oh, dear me... i'm reviewing! :)
and i know how sucky school is... ick.
8/25/2009 c11 1Miss Sarah Louise
This is such a good story! Please please please please please finish it! Its super good.
-Sarah =D
1Miss Sarah LouiseThis is such a good story! Please please please please please finish it! Its super good.
-Sarah =D
8/25/2009 c11 59Hedgi
Spot, Spot, Spot... i know he's from the past, but reading a persons mail( or texts) without permission, well, that's gonna get ya in trouble :)
very dramatic! goo work!
59HedgiSpot, Spot, Spot... i know he's from the past, but reading a persons mail( or texts) without permission, well, that's gonna get ya in trouble :)
very dramatic! goo work!
8/25/2009 c11 3InsideMyRainbowEyes
Ok weird chapter but I still can't wait till the next chapter! Good job, I can't wait to see how the story ends out.
3InsideMyRainbowEyesOk weird chapter but I still can't wait till the next chapter! Good job, I can't wait to see how the story ends out.
8/24/2009 c11 4Izabeal Finley
I loved that! Spot your looking pretty screwed buddy!
lol
Update soon!
And I hope your dad's okay. My dad died February 9th, 2009. So I hope he's okay!
4Izabeal FinleyI loved that! Spot your looking pretty screwed buddy!
lol
Update soon!
And I hope your dad's okay. My dad died February 9th, 2009. So I hope he's okay!
8/10/2009 c10 59Hedgi
i can't see the url, but i want to join! will you message me the link? and i'm so glad your dad is feeling better!
59Hedgii can't see the url, but i want to join! will you message me the link? and i'm so glad your dad is feeling better!
8/8/2009 c9 1Newsieslover123
I compleatly understand, my mom died and durring me writing my story i was in the process of moving to my sisters cause my dad was sick and almost died so take your time :)
1Newsieslover123I compleatly understand, my mom died and durring me writing my story i was in the process of moving to my sisters cause my dad was sick and almost died so take your time :)
8/7/2009 c9 59Hedgi
oh my gosh, i'm really sorry. i can't say i know how you feel, not really, but about a year ago my mom, who had me late in life, so she's old, had a bad scare. i'll keep you and your family in my thoughts. don't worry about updating- really.
God be with you
HNA
59Hedgioh my gosh, i'm really sorry. i can't say i know how you feel, not really, but about a year ago my mom, who had me late in life, so she's old, had a bad scare. i'll keep you and your family in my thoughts. don't worry about updating- really.
God be with you
HNA
8/6/2009 c9 32YumKiwiDelicious
totally understandable! take as long as you need, hope your dad feels better soon!
32YumKiwiDelicioustotally understandable! take as long as you need, hope your dad feels better soon!