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5/17/2012 c1 Abandoned Account Number 563
Only two things:

1) you forgot that Choji screamed "CHUBBIES RULE!" during hte match, but it's good without it.

2) Please, please, please! Make a sequal where Choji and Shikimaru team up in the Chunin exams to take down Temari. Had Dosu not been kiled it would have been a three-way match between Dosu, Shikiamru, and Temari.
3/12/2010 c1 Choujifangirl
I loved your fanfiction about choji and when he kicked Dosu's butt, I liked the part where dosu got a splinter in his foot,that was funny.
3/6/2010 c1 7Kitty Terula
Ah... this made me grin. CURSES, A SPLINTER! xD
7/3/2009 c1 18Blondi89
“Curses, a splinter!” hahaha...nice one. I also liked how you described Chouji as pleasingly plump. And woo! Chouji won, I knew he was the man. Very nice, I really enjoyed it as a Chouji fan. :)

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