12/19/2020 c4 Princess
Please please update . I really want to read next chapter . Its amazing . Please please update.
Please please update . I really want to read next chapter . Its amazing . Please please update.
3/20/2014 c3 Imlookingatacat
Tala x emily
Ian x Hoshiko
Kai x Violetta
Bryan x Andrea
Spencer x Addie
Just guesses and I thought out the reasons for them for a while. I like your story and I with you would continue, though I doubt you will because of how long it has been.
It would make a nice story, and I like the way you started writing it. Its hard for me to find a beyblade story that intrests me. I watched it when i was a kid and it stayed with me, like digimon did. Your characters seem interesting, and I wish I could know more about them. And their beys. I would really like to know more about their beys.
Gosh darn it :p
Anyway, I would still like to know if I got any of the pairings correct, if you remember what they were.
Would you be able to message me to let me know? Even if it's just to say that you don't remember what they were. I would really appreciate it.
Also, I apologize gor any spelling mistakes that this review might have. Im sending this review from my phone (not all of the buttons work sobi have had to rely greatly on autocorrect).
Tala x emily
Ian x Hoshiko
Kai x Violetta
Bryan x Andrea
Spencer x Addie
Just guesses and I thought out the reasons for them for a while. I like your story and I with you would continue, though I doubt you will because of how long it has been.
It would make a nice story, and I like the way you started writing it. Its hard for me to find a beyblade story that intrests me. I watched it when i was a kid and it stayed with me, like digimon did. Your characters seem interesting, and I wish I could know more about them. And their beys. I would really like to know more about their beys.
Gosh darn it :p
Anyway, I would still like to know if I got any of the pairings correct, if you remember what they were.
Would you be able to message me to let me know? Even if it's just to say that you don't remember what they were. I would really appreciate it.
Also, I apologize gor any spelling mistakes that this review might have. Im sending this review from my phone (not all of the buttons work sobi have had to rely greatly on autocorrect).
7/22/2010 c3 Ha ha ha ha
AMAZING!I LOVE IT! PLEASE UPDATE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! UPDATE!
AMAZING!I LOVE IT! PLEASE UPDATE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! UPDATE!
12/12/2009 c1 11Archermusician
Sorry to message you like this, but it was the only way my computer wouldn't freeze.
For starters, I want to thank you for the review and the story add.
It was something I thought of randomly in class a while ago, and being Irish myself I think that writing about Finn will be fun.
I didn't think that a teenager would work out well enough, as she wouldn't have a job or be able to get into a bar. More will be learned about Sin later on. Promise.
What she was thinking after Finn told her about his "job" was that she would be able to find and possibly steal more treasures because of it. I plan to portray her as one loving things that don't belong to her.
I don't know when I will update next as I was bored watching the game today and started to type, and I have finals this week.
Sorry to message you like this, but it was the only way my computer wouldn't freeze.
For starters, I want to thank you for the review and the story add.
It was something I thought of randomly in class a while ago, and being Irish myself I think that writing about Finn will be fun.
I didn't think that a teenager would work out well enough, as she wouldn't have a job or be able to get into a bar. More will be learned about Sin later on. Promise.
What she was thinking after Finn told her about his "job" was that she would be able to find and possibly steal more treasures because of it. I plan to portray her as one loving things that don't belong to her.
I don't know when I will update next as I was bored watching the game today and started to type, and I have finals this week.
7/6/2009 c2 Katelnn
Hoshiko Sora/ Kai H.
Violetta Lombardi/ Tyson unless hes with Hillary
Emily Jacobs/ Rai
Adelaide Marmaduke/ Max T.
Andrea Hansen/ Kenny
so? am i right send me an email at if i am!
Hoshiko Sora/ Kai H.
Violetta Lombardi/ Tyson unless hes with Hillary
Emily Jacobs/ Rai
Adelaide Marmaduke/ Max T.
Andrea Hansen/ Kenny
so? am i right send me an email at if i am!
7/5/2009 c2 blaze
oh please tell m that hoshi is with kai
oh please tell m that hoshi is with kai