for Mind's Catch6/17/2010 c1 saya420
great start on this story and im really looking forward to the next chapter to be updated. so until then ja ne.
great start on this story and im really looking forward to the next chapter to be updated. so until then ja ne.
10/2/2009 c1 DarkRavie
I like what you've started and I love the pairing you chose, it's my favorite. I can't wait to read what happens in your next chapter.
I like what you've started and I love the pairing you chose, it's my favorite. I can't wait to read what happens in your next chapter.
9/30/2009 c1 
10Aroara Moon
This is really good Can't wait to see what happens Next... or read in this case.
10Aroara MoonThis is really good Can't wait to see what happens Next... or read in this case.
9/27/2009 c1 7xxSnowxxAngelxx
Aww, congratz on putting up your first independent story! I also had written my first a while ago(and only have two chapters up.. no inspiration for the next one T^T). I like it so farm hope the next chapter is up soon^^
7xxSnowxxAngelxxAww, congratz on putting up your first independent story! I also had written my first a while ago(and only have two chapters up.. no inspiration for the next one T^T). I like it so farm hope the next chapter is up soon^^
7/10/2009 c1 1silverharpie17
i have to say, you caught my interst with your story! Keep going! i would to know what happens next as well in the future! ;3
1silverharpie17i have to say, you caught my interst with your story! Keep going! i would to know what happens next as well in the future! ;3
7/7/2009 c1 1xXKuroTenshi666Xx
Ooh! I love the idea! I've never read a story with a plot like this before! Very creative and very original so you simply MUST continue! lol poor Naru-chan almost burnt his house down from a wet dream involoving Tachi-sama! Again musch love and support! Thnx for posting it! XD Bye!
1xXKuroTenshi666XxOoh! I love the idea! I've never read a story with a plot like this before! Very creative and very original so you simply MUST continue! lol poor Naru-chan almost burnt his house down from a wet dream involoving Tachi-sama! Again musch love and support! Thnx for posting it! XD Bye!
7/7/2009 c1 Hyarou
This sound pretty damn interesting story. Four stars, I would have given five but this chapter was short, so only four stars for now :P
This sound pretty damn interesting story. Four stars, I would have given five but this chapter was short, so only four stars for now :P
7/6/2009 c1 MadMonki
this got my attention. naru-chan had a very very nice dream*drools* looking forward to the next chapter.
ja ne^^
this got my attention. naru-chan had a very very nice dream*drools* looking forward to the next chapter.
ja ne^^
7/6/2009 c1 1nightlotus13
its good I cant wait fo you to put out more chap's i'll be waiting for that ^-^ keep up the good job and good luck.
1nightlotus13its good I cant wait fo you to put out more chap's i'll be waiting for that ^-^ keep up the good job and good luck.