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9/15/2016 c3 Sophia Xerxes
Really awesome
Especially the songs are fab
7/29/2009 c3 4Deleting Account12321
aw Deidara died :( anyway it wasnt really a Sasuke Naruto story...
7/15/2009 c2 JSinuYasha
lmao! Gaara just randomly stabbed somebody. I'm kinda following this story but I'm pretty confused. Is this story really complete?
7/6/2009 c1 2Leutheria
A good idea, but there are a lot of gramatical and spelling errors.

Don't forget your commas, periods, and other bits of punctuation. Some punctuation is easily passed over, but eventually the sentences stop making sense.

Capitalization is another thing. All sentences start with a capital letter, that includes dialogue. And first and surnames should also start with a capital letter.

I also suggest you make it longer and add some more details.

Great job, keep up the work and may fix your future stories with the tips tips I gave you here and your writing with surely get better and better over time!

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