for A Perfect World9/24/2011 c1 
45Yin-Yang Yoh
This is actually not bad. To others who could possibly flame this, oh wellz, I think this is a good story.
45Yin-Yang YohThis is actually not bad. To others who could possibly flame this, oh wellz, I think this is a good story.
12/10/2010 c1 WAKEMEUPWAKEMEUPINSIDECANTWAK
...THIS IS AWESOME! Poor Mimi, doesn't know what he's up to :'(
-TNFG
...THIS IS AWESOME! Poor Mimi, doesn't know what he's up to :'(
-TNFG
11/30/2010 c1 Purinblood
My word, you have to finish this fic. you HAVE to! OMG! This is my first fanfic that i read with Dimentio in it, and to be honest, It warms my heart like soft sparks from a sparkler. Why, I wish Dimentio was real. Not to diminish all worlds, that is. but i think i have the talents to win over his semi cold heart...mmmmmm!
My word, you have to finish this fic. you HAVE to! OMG! This is my first fanfic that i read with Dimentio in it, and to be honest, It warms my heart like soft sparks from a sparkler. Why, I wish Dimentio was real. Not to diminish all worlds, that is. but i think i have the talents to win over his semi cold heart...mmmmmm!
6/28/2010 c1 Guest
loved it! you should continue or make sequel
loved it! you should continue or make sequel
6/28/2010 c1 Professor J. L. Nemo
Oh my GOSH this is brilliant!
Please write more!
Oh my GOSH this is brilliant!
Please write more!
6/10/2010 c1 JacobxLeahx
I think you did an excellent job with this little one-shot. I really do think you should write more of these guys! You do a really good job!
They all seemed really in character and even though you branced out a little with Dimentio, you did it correctly unlike some people. XD
Anyway, I loved it!
I think you did an excellent job with this little one-shot. I really do think you should write more of these guys! You do a really good job!
They all seemed really in character and even though you branced out a little with Dimentio, you did it correctly unlike some people. XD
Anyway, I loved it!
5/17/2010 c1 6Froststar423
Now you listen here: If ANYONE flames you, I will personally kick their butts! This is awesome! I literally told my friend, BEST. DIMI. EVER! I love it. I'm going strait to your profile to see if you have anymore. Byz! :D
~Froststar 3
6Froststar423Now you listen here: If ANYONE flames you, I will personally kick their butts! This is awesome! I literally told my friend, BEST. DIMI. EVER! I love it. I'm going strait to your profile to see if you have anymore. Byz! :D
~Froststar 3
2/17/2010 c1 Anonymous
Wow, that was a very interesting story. I hope you make a sequal. you should also think higher of yourself. you are an exelent writer
Wow, that was a very interesting story. I hope you make a sequal. you should also think higher of yourself. you are an exelent writer
12/26/2009 c1 Sarifina Filth
Wez!
That was great! And I don't think that was TO incredibly out of character, though I suppose it's all a matter of opinion and the way you choose to look at things. It's understandable that he might have regrets as to betraying the people he worked with, and it makes sense that he may at some points question his plans.
And you don't even have to worry about anyone else, I thought both Mimi and Nastasia were strangely in character, it was just Dimento people may have questioned.
Besides, there's nothing wrong with in site to the characters thoughts, I really don't think Dimento was given enough thought in neither fanfics nor the games.
Anyways, I really did like it, and I'm impressed! I hope to see more from you. That's my way of encouraging you to write more!
Most encouraginly,
~Sarifina Filth
Wez!
That was great! And I don't think that was TO incredibly out of character, though I suppose it's all a matter of opinion and the way you choose to look at things. It's understandable that he might have regrets as to betraying the people he worked with, and it makes sense that he may at some points question his plans.
And you don't even have to worry about anyone else, I thought both Mimi and Nastasia were strangely in character, it was just Dimento people may have questioned.
Besides, there's nothing wrong with in site to the characters thoughts, I really don't think Dimento was given enough thought in neither fanfics nor the games.
Anyways, I really did like it, and I'm impressed! I hope to see more from you. That's my way of encouraging you to write more!
Most encouraginly,
~Sarifina Filth
10/20/2009 c1 4superblooper
Whee, that was very very cute. I like the idea of DimentioxMimi as well! I think there are a lot more of us than you think, even if some vocal people can't get with the program!
I love how Mimi is still portrayed as childish and Dimentio, the cold and caluclated mastermind, can't help but be attracted to her charismatic naivety. Lovely!
One day, I want to do a fic about Bleck and his minions, but I have to finish what I start ^_^
Great job and keep writing, I'd love to see more!
4superblooperWhee, that was very very cute. I like the idea of DimentioxMimi as well! I think there are a lot more of us than you think, even if some vocal people can't get with the program!
I love how Mimi is still portrayed as childish and Dimentio, the cold and caluclated mastermind, can't help but be attracted to her charismatic naivety. Lovely!
One day, I want to do a fic about Bleck and his minions, but I have to finish what I start ^_^
Great job and keep writing, I'd love to see more!
9/19/2009 c1 3Demoncat123222
That was so CUTE! I just can't stand how adorable that was, its amazing how cute something can be yet how sad it can be. Amazing story! :D
3Demoncat123222That was so CUTE! I just can't stand how adorable that was, its amazing how cute something can be yet how sad it can be. Amazing story! :D
8/29/2009 c1 jesterprincess111
I loved it that was just so sweet of Dimentio. plez continue to wright like this. =3
I loved it that was just so sweet of Dimentio. plez continue to wright like this. =3