for Poke'life7/23/2012 c3 Koneko
Nooooooo! You must continue, even though it's been this long! I love all of these stories!
Nooooooo! You must continue, even though it's been this long! I love all of these stories!
10/26/2011 c3 
3Alicia H. Heart
This seems interesting, and as always, I love your stories! especially my life in one piece!
3Alicia H. HeartThis seems interesting, and as always, I love your stories! especially my life in one piece!
2/2/2011 c3 10superattackpea
Wow, I've been looking for a fic like this!
I also read My Life in One Piece, so I found the
parts with Kaede in it really funny XD
can you update this soon?
10superattackpeaWow, I've been looking for a fic like this!
I also read My Life in One Piece, so I found the
parts with Kaede in it really funny XD
can you update this soon?
7/29/2010 c3 1sugar-run
please continue! I love your stories and now when I discovered that you wrote a pokemon storie I became so glad! :D I will impatiently wait for the next chapter
1sugar-runplease continue! I love your stories and now when I discovered that you wrote a pokemon storie I became so glad! :D I will impatiently wait for the next chapter
1/23/2010 c3 14wei2vile
Well, since you asked... Keep writing!
This is all good and a lot of funny moments in it.
14wei2vileWell, since you asked... Keep writing!
This is all good and a lot of funny moments in it.
1/14/2010 c3 Vixeona
I noticed a few typos!
"Not to mention stupid if it was from her freaking out, she gave her father enough crap about always panicking as it was, so dying that was was just out of the question." - end of the sentence you use was twice
Also #3 part of your disclaimer "'I fell into another world' typef of fics." - typef (yes every now and then I humor myself by actually reading the disclamer... even though I've already read it before o.O)
"She wouldn't have been nearly as surprised if it was her father backing the car up into or something," - the last part of that statement... I believe is missing words?
"it was merely an anime that resembled the creature from the anime" -first anime is suppose to be animal?
“Teleportation completely, have a nice day.” - complete?
"raccoon like anime"- animal again
I loved the part where zigzagoon was wondering what her level was and if maybe she was flying type! Cute! I found the perception of the little guy quite interesting though, never really crossed my mind what a pokemon could be thinking when a random trainer comes along. You almost over did the freaking out though, or at least used the term a bit too often imo. I like the chapter and I say listen to your little slave/boss imp thing! lol
I noticed a few typos!
"Not to mention stupid if it was from her freaking out, she gave her father enough crap about always panicking as it was, so dying that was was just out of the question." - end of the sentence you use was twice
Also #3 part of your disclaimer "'I fell into another world' typef of fics." - typef (yes every now and then I humor myself by actually reading the disclamer... even though I've already read it before o.O)
"She wouldn't have been nearly as surprised if it was her father backing the car up into or something," - the last part of that statement... I believe is missing words?
"it was merely an anime that resembled the creature from the anime" -first anime is suppose to be animal?
“Teleportation completely, have a nice day.” - complete?
"raccoon like anime"- animal again
I loved the part where zigzagoon was wondering what her level was and if maybe she was flying type! Cute! I found the perception of the little guy quite interesting though, never really crossed my mind what a pokemon could be thinking when a random trainer comes along. You almost over did the freaking out though, or at least used the term a bit too often imo. I like the chapter and I say listen to your little slave/boss imp thing! lol
1/14/2010 c3 5xPikachu-Princessx
I liked this chapter! Pokemon finally made an appearance :D
There were quite a few moments in this chapter that really made me laugh.
At first I thought the green haired guy was Drew, but when he called out a Pidgey, I had second thoughts. Or maybe you just changed his Pokemon?
5xPikachu-PrincessxI liked this chapter! Pokemon finally made an appearance :D
There were quite a few moments in this chapter that really made me laugh.
At first I thought the green haired guy was Drew, but when he called out a Pidgey, I had second thoughts. Or maybe you just changed his Pokemon?
1/13/2010 c2 Vixeona
We get chapter 3 10 days ago? XD "chapter 3, tomarrow (1/3/10)" sorry made me giggle so I had to! Anyway I like the breakdown better, it flows well. I'll check back later for that update then =P
We get chapter 3 10 days ago? XD "chapter 3, tomarrow (1/3/10)" sorry made me giggle so I had to! Anyway I like the breakdown better, it flows well. I'll check back later for that update then =P
1/13/2010 c2 5xPikachu-Princessx
Not much happened in this chapter but it was still really good :)
I'm wondering when Pokemon will start showing up, and what her first Pokemon is. That's when it will definitely be interesting :D
5xPikachu-PrincessxNot much happened in this chapter but it was still really good :)
I'm wondering when Pokemon will start showing up, and what her first Pokemon is. That's when it will definitely be interesting :D
1/13/2010 c1 xPikachu-Princessx
I was instantly drawn to this. Your writing skills are really good and the chapter was definitely brilliant. Everything was described so well! :)
There were a few mistakes like when you called Alex 'Ashley' near the beginning xD
The dinging and the transporting thing was hilarious! I can imagine it being just like the phones in the Pokemon anime.
I was instantly drawn to this. Your writing skills are really good and the chapter was definitely brilliant. Everything was described so well! :)
There were a few mistakes like when you called Alex 'Ashley' near the beginning xD
The dinging and the transporting thing was hilarious! I can imagine it being just like the phones in the Pokemon anime.