8/12/2014 c1 3Domino2
Hahaha lol, couldn't you make it into a two shot? I'd love to read what David would say and how pisses the boys got about there clothes being mixed up :-)
Hahaha lol, couldn't you make it into a two shot? I'd love to read what David would say and how pisses the boys got about there clothes being mixed up :-)
6/24/2010 c1 3CarvedKid
Haha this is so funny. You've made me see Paul in a new light. Amazing writing, I can just imagine this happening! Great job! :)
Haha this is so funny. You've made me see Paul in a new light. Amazing writing, I can just imagine this happening! Great job! :)
7/21/2009 c1 anna
I can't believe I haven't come across this before! This is a fantastic piece of writing and with wonderful characterisation - you've really hit Paul's character on the head and I can totally see him doing something like that. Well done! Please write another story soon, I'd love to read more!
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I can't believe I haven't come across this before! This is a fantastic piece of writing and with wonderful characterisation - you've really hit Paul's character on the head and I can totally see him doing something like that. Well done! Please write another story soon, I'd love to read more!
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7/19/2009 c1 4CrazedAuthorNo.5
i loved your characterization! This was a very interesting oneshot. You captured the essence of paul. Great job!
i loved your characterization! This was a very interesting oneshot. You captured the essence of paul. Great job!
7/10/2009 c1 6Gothilique
Lol that was really funny and rather detailed, this is totally getting added to my favourites.
Lol that was really funny and rather detailed, this is totally getting added to my favourites.