for My Atonement7/23/2009 c4 cinnyshy
I'm so glad that you did an, Edward POV! It's always good to see what the other person is thinking. I kinda figured that she hurt him when she left him all those years ago. At least hes moved on a lil bit. I do wonder how far their realationship is going to go? Is she going to tell him that he has a daughter? I know that shes going to see him again, so that she can interview him, but what happens after that? I do hope that they get to air out what has been going on between them. I know that both have changed in the last 10yrs, but i'm sure that they can work on being friends again. If not being lovers again.
I'm so glad that you did an, Edward POV! It's always good to see what the other person is thinking. I kinda figured that she hurt him when she left him all those years ago. At least hes moved on a lil bit. I do wonder how far their realationship is going to go? Is she going to tell him that he has a daughter? I know that shes going to see him again, so that she can interview him, but what happens after that? I do hope that they get to air out what has been going on between them. I know that both have changed in the last 10yrs, but i'm sure that they can work on being friends again. If not being lovers again.
7/22/2009 c4 
3twiobsession14
Awesome chapter :] If you still need a beta, I'll do it. Just let me know :]
3twiobsession14Awesome chapter :] If you still need a beta, I'll do it. Just let me know :]
7/16/2009 c3 darcy13
Your story has a real grown-up, sophisticated mood tp it. It's a welcome change from a lot of stories. I have to agree with all your recommendations on your profile. You have great taste! That may explain the high quality of your story.
Thanks for taking the time to share. Looking forward to more.
Your story has a real grown-up, sophisticated mood tp it. It's a welcome change from a lot of stories. I have to agree with all your recommendations on your profile. You have great taste! That may explain the high quality of your story.
Thanks for taking the time to share. Looking forward to more.
7/8/2009 c1 cinnyshy
WOW! That's diffrent. Bella being a, player, and, Edward being the shy virgin! That's really cute to say the least. I can tell that this is going to be diffrent. I also take it that, Bella, and her mom are leaving? But where to we don't know yet. I wonder what, Edward is going to think about her leaving him. What is going to happen to our lil, Bella? Is she going to keep on the path that she is, or is she going to change the direction of her life? Is she going to go to college? Or is she going to be stuck at dead end jobs?
WOW! That's diffrent. Bella being a, player, and, Edward being the shy virgin! That's really cute to say the least. I can tell that this is going to be diffrent. I also take it that, Bella, and her mom are leaving? But where to we don't know yet. I wonder what, Edward is going to think about her leaving him. What is going to happen to our lil, Bella? Is she going to keep on the path that she is, or is she going to change the direction of her life? Is she going to go to college? Or is she going to be stuck at dead end jobs?