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we know Bella is a natural sheild. but what else is she hiding? Good theory, I wonder why no one else thought of it?
we know Bella is a natural sheild. but what else is she hiding? Good theory, I wonder why no one else thought of it?
9/1/2009 c4 HaileyCatherine
umm just an idea lol take it or not idc but you could say he goes to bellas and acts like nothing happened but she knows something is wrong with himm. he tells her and asks her if she can stop protecting her mind for a few minutes etc. i fyou want any thing else email me at lol love ya
umm just an idea lol take it or not idc but you could say he goes to bellas and acts like nothing happened but she knows something is wrong with himm. he tells her and asks her if she can stop protecting her mind for a few minutes etc. i fyou want any thing else email me at lol love ya
8/30/2009 c1 
7TorpleKnope
wow that was original, and it really was a doorway into both edwards and bellas dark desires, wonderful, i dont thin anyone else has ever gone that in depth before.
wonderful :)
7TorpleKnopewow that was original, and it really was a doorway into both edwards and bellas dark desires, wonderful, i dont thin anyone else has ever gone that in depth before.
wonderful :)
8/29/2009 c4 4KnightTime32
I'm sorry, about before, but I love it! (By the way, is that the end of the story, or is there more? Because I personally would love for it to continue - though I'm not very helpful in ideas, maybe having Edward tell Bella about him reading her mind?)Also, I loved Emmett's costume!
4KnightTime32I'm sorry, about before, but I love it! (By the way, is that the end of the story, or is there more? Because I personally would love for it to continue - though I'm not very helpful in ideas, maybe having Edward tell Bella about him reading her mind?)Also, I loved Emmett's costume!
8/29/2009 c4 Gen
hey i really like it so far!
i was always wondering what would happen if edward could read her mind!
so keep up the good work and right more please i need 2 know what will happen!
hey i really like it so far!
i was always wondering what would happen if edward could read her mind!
so keep up the good work and right more please i need 2 know what will happen!
8/29/2009 c4 2lilyflower102
i totally loved the banana thing *get a banana suit and maracas and does a duet with Emmet* i have writers block too i was thinking of making a new story but i thought of that like a couple weeks ago. and i honestly dont hve any ideas for you.
2lilyflower102i totally loved the banana thing *get a banana suit and maracas and does a duet with Emmet* i have writers block too i was thinking of making a new story but i thought of that like a couple weeks ago. and i honestly dont hve any ideas for you.
8/29/2009 c3 Tylie-marie
Update more I really liked it and I don't say that about alot of stories because alot I read suck
Update more I really liked it and I don't say that about alot of stories because alot I read suck
8/29/2009 c3 2vivian10471
I LOVE IT ! its so mysterious how Edward can't figure out why this happened !
2vivian10471I LOVE IT ! its so mysterious how Edward can't figure out why this happened !
8/29/2009 c3 4KnightTime32
I loved it,
but (I'm not trying to be mean, or anything)it could be better if you capitalized "I"'s and checked it over for spelling before hand. (Again I'm not trying to be mean)
Other than that, I loved it. I love the concept of the story.
4KnightTime32I loved it,
but (I'm not trying to be mean, or anything)it could be better if you capitalized "I"'s and checked it over for spelling before hand. (Again I'm not trying to be mean)
Other than that, I loved it. I love the concept of the story.