for driving him home12/9/2011 c1 Puppetshow
AMAZING fanfic one the best I'd ever read PLEASE continue this fanfic
The thing is I was actually listening to Orianthi -Shut up & Kiss me while reading the end,what are the odds of that
AMAZING fanfic one the best I'd ever read PLEASE continue this fanfic
The thing is I was actually listening to Orianthi -Shut up & Kiss me while reading the end,what are the odds of that
3/10/2011 c1 
5LukeiggyMcgee
I loved it...I think that is the best NCIS fanfic I have ever read...I love the story..please tell if you write more...
Luke..
5LukeiggyMcgeeI loved it...I think that is the best NCIS fanfic I have ever read...I love the story..please tell if you write more...
Luke..
1/7/2011 c1 8Shacklebolt's Mistress
yay! I liked it a lot. you said in your profile that you weren't very good - you LIAR! hahaha.
but seriously, continue this please. please! pretty please with an Abby on top? I can't describe how disappointed I was that there wasn't a link to the next chapter. I made this face :(
8Shacklebolt's Mistressyay! I liked it a lot. you said in your profile that you weren't very good - you LIAR! hahaha.
but seriously, continue this please. please! pretty please with an Abby on top? I can't describe how disappointed I was that there wasn't a link to the next chapter. I made this face :(
11/9/2010 c1 SagepunkSom
So I see it has been well over a year since you said you would add a next part. I guess you won't be continuing? Too bad, I totally would have loved to have read what smut you would have had Tim and Tony do together. I completely see Tim being the one in control in this being that he is getting what he fantasizes about. This started out great.
So I see it has been well over a year since you said you would add a next part. I guess you won't be continuing? Too bad, I totally would have loved to have read what smut you would have had Tim and Tony do together. I completely see Tim being the one in control in this being that he is getting what he fantasizes about. This started out great.
1/11/2010 c1 5Tigryphon
I would definitely want to see more! I love your style, but I'd like it to be a little more mature, if ya know what I mean. I think that once they finally "seal the deal", maybe they could get caught in the office? I have a thing for those sort of situations. Caught by Gibbs. Yes, Gibbs.
5TigryphonI would definitely want to see more! I love your style, but I'd like it to be a little more mature, if ya know what I mean. I think that once they finally "seal the deal", maybe they could get caught in the office? I have a thing for those sort of situations. Caught by Gibbs. Yes, Gibbs.
12/23/2009 c1 139Meatball42
I love how awkward and sweet and embarassing this story is. It's pretty in-character, besides, of course, the relationship itself, which isn't canon, but whatever, that's why it's fanfiction. I really hope you do contiue it, I like a previous reviewer's suggestion of breaking away from canon and maybe making something happen to Tony. Or even continuing and describing their relationship through the next eppy. The only thing that was annoying was that you mentioned Jeanne. who didn't appear til long after Under Covers. Besides that, loved it!
139Meatball42I love how awkward and sweet and embarassing this story is. It's pretty in-character, besides, of course, the relationship itself, which isn't canon, but whatever, that's why it's fanfiction. I really hope you do contiue it, I like a previous reviewer's suggestion of breaking away from canon and maybe making something happen to Tony. Or even continuing and describing their relationship through the next eppy. The only thing that was annoying was that you mentioned Jeanne. who didn't appear til long after Under Covers. Besides that, loved it!
10/18/2009 c1 52Miss Barbara
I love it!
It is perfectly sweet, Tim taking care of Tony, and then brokeback mountain, and the kissing. Hot!
Please continue.
52Miss BarbaraI love it!
It is perfectly sweet, Tim taking care of Tony, and then brokeback mountain, and the kissing. Hot!
Please continue.
7/13/2009 c1 bchorse1
Great story, you should definitely continue it. Maybe you could make something happen to Tony like McGee feared.
Great story, you should definitely continue it. Maybe you could make something happen to Tony like McGee feared.